This Ignition - Comments

Comment swap.

I really liked this one-shit, even though I'm not really the person to read stories where K-pop is included, seeing that it just really isn't me at all, just like reading 'beast' isn't me neither. But I gave it a try, and I definitely don't regret it :) I liked your writing form, and how you described yourself and made it a filthy-kinda-one shot. Even though it's far from my 'readin style', I'm glad that comment swap brought me here... All in all, you're a really amazing writer, keep on going :) – If you write more one-shots in this style, let me know, and I’ll definitely give them a shot 

Wow, this was amazing. Like, really. You're a wonderful writer. I love how you described everything so well, especially the lighter and Jiae's numerous attempts. That being said, I really enjoyed that Junhyung was finally able to make the fire stay up. I don't know why but all that was my favorite aspect of this.

But Junhyung, bless his soul. I love how he came to her aid but I don't think it was in a cliche way at all. I agree with him on that smoking thing and I'm really glad he was so blunt with her about it being bad.

Overall, I just really really liked this. If I didn't mention it already, you're a super talented writer. :)

Omg. I love the repetition in this. And how his hair is red like fire and in the end his eyes are orange like fire. And how there's fire and ice. Really lovely. <3

This was really good. I couldn't move my eyes from the screen. I understood the girl as if i was her. I felt the emotions coming from this piece. Everything just fell into place, and it seemed like nothing was rushed. And i just instantly liked Junhyung because he seemed so real and just perfect. great job.

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I kinda like this one. It's a bit confussing in my opinion, but I like it.
Good job! :)

Ohhhh~ a oneshot involving K-Pop, you don't see many of those on Mibba c:

Okay so this story was amazing. The descriptions, how you described their characters. I think I fell more in love with Junhyung while reading this. I really loved the addition of smoking, it really flowed perfectly. And when he intercepted that phone call was hilarious. The way you portrayed their characters was perfect and just beautiful. Your vocabulary was perfect and there were no mistakes.

Overall this was beautifully written and flowed perfectly (:

Comment Swap!
I love the way you describe whats happening so perfectly. It is quite a good one shot, I wish you would continue it. Being honest I've never read anything like this. I really enjoyed this. Your a great writer. Please continue to write!

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I really liked this one shot you have such a good way of setting the scene! :) I really like your form of writing. I'm really glad comment swap brought me here as I've never read anything like this before, a part of me wishes it wasn't as one shot as I'd love to see this explored further, maybe in a full story, but considering it is just a one shot I really do love it and think you are majorly talented when it comes to writing!

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I really liked the first chapter, you have such a good way of setting the scene! :) I really like your form of writing. I'm really glad comment swap brought me here as I've never read anything like this before, I'll definitely be sticking around to read the rest.

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This was quite an interesting story. Though I'm not into 'Beast', I still kept reading since it really drew me in. The description was flawless, it was the perfect amount. Your grammar was nice, too. Everything flowed well, which made it easy to follow. This story was bitter sweet, and I do adore bitter sweet stories, so that's a plus. I also adore the layout, it fit the story perfectly, and it's calming in a way.

Good job! :)

Oh my god. So, comment swap brought me here lets just say I was hooked at the summary!!,!,!!,!,!,!!!! This was a very very very very very very very very very very very good story. At first, I must admit that I was a bit weirded out, but I warmed up to the story within minutes. Keep on going!!!