Set My Clocks Early - Comments

You've got a really interesting way of writing!! I really like the Sixteen Candles inserts in the story. Some parts were a little confusing, or maybe it was just not what I’m used to. ‘He said,’ after three lines in a row kind of threw me off, but I like the repitition later on in the story. I especially like the line. ‘The wallpaper is suffocating, and I can’t breathe.’ (: I enjoyed reading this~ Keep writing, would love to read more.

Comment swap brought me here, and I'm so happy it brought me here!

I loved the title because it automatically got me thinking of the next lyrics "'Cause I know I'm always late."

So that was brilliant for me, I then noticed the layout, I personally really like it because it is simple and effective and generally lovely to look at :) but it doesn't make you concentrate solely on the layout. It pairs well with the story, I really want to read more, I'm actually getting a bit fed up of all the highly sexually flared gay stories/fan fictions. I think this is lovely. A really nice take on things. Please write more? :(
I've recommended and I know my chances of more are slim but I'm subscribing too :3

I love this. It has a nice realness to it.

Absolutely amazing. The repetition of "Andrew" "I love you" and "I miss you" was great. Also great description, really great emotions.
Loved everything except the way you used the word "sat" really bugged me. I get what you were trying to say, but I think it should be "sitting."
Like, "He's sitting outside and I'm..."
Overall, awesome job.

This is beautiful.

:3 I really love this. Comment Swap sent me here and it's one of the rare *really* good ones. You're really good at writing and I like your descriptions. I like how short and sweet it is and how it end on a cliffhanger. It only makes it better. :3 Keep on writing! :D <3