Save Me - Comments

This was so lovely! I loved both of the characters and how sweet they are to each other, and how they make each other feel better. It was just a really nice story :)

I may or may not be reading your stories instead of going to the gym or my morning lecture, oops.

Good character development and expression. I liked the background on Craig but there wasn't a whole lot on Jeffrey. It was a cute story and pretty good for doing something different like 3rd person. I had a problem with Craig having a phone.... Especially with texting. To me it seems like it would be really unlikely to be affordable. But I guess it depends on the wage right? Good job all in all :)

I like Jefferey. And I felt so bad for Craig. It sucks he had to quit school and I literally hated Jeff's dad. Wished I could jump through the tv and punch him in the face.
Not necessarily my favorite of yours but it was still pretty good, as your stories always are :)
Interesting as well reading yours in 3rd person!

That was great! It really was! For someone who doesn't write in third person, it was pretty good. You followed the character personalities to a t and then some. I really liked it. It was realisitic. It had good grammar with only a few slip ups, and you could feel the emotion of the characters. You just set the bar for the other entries, and it is a pretty high bar.