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  • KillJoySynner

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    O.o super mind fuck! love it!!:D
    September 4th, 2012 at 09:15pm
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    o.o
    September 4th, 2012 at 08:25pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    O____o
    September 4th, 2012 at 07:01pm
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    Loved it!!!
    More?
    August 26th, 2012 at 05:19pm
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    Yes yes yes yes!!!
    Glad the guys are safe!
    More? *bats eyelashes*
    August 15th, 2012 at 04:29am
  • RoadieEm

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    I take it the reboot is doing better?
    August 14th, 2012 at 05:00pm
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    O__o
    Hope the guys are ok...
    August 14th, 2012 at 04:08pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    Awesome!
    Update soon please!!
    August 13th, 2012 at 10:09pm
  • RoadieEm

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    Farore makes some good points. I am re-writing the story.
    August 13th, 2012 at 06:40pm
  • Farore

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    I think your dialogue is great, but the rest of the story seems to be going too fast paced without much description. It didn't make me feel the emotions they were having because of how quickly everything was moving. I still read all 3 chapters though because I want to know what happens to them. If I was in a zombie apocalypse I would confine myself somewhere safe and drink a lot of beer.
    August 13th, 2012 at 08:57am
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    Holy shit, after I posted this there was a HUGE black snake in my backyard.
    August 13th, 2012 at 12:52am
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    Holy shit!!!!!!
    Bahahahahaha at what Matt said! xDD
    More soon please!!
    August 12th, 2012 at 07:55pm
  • RoadieEm

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    Sorry guys, the update I had ready for today was erased due to a computer crash. I will try and rewrite it in time to post it Friday or Saturday.
    August 10th, 2012 at 06:12am
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    >:)
    August 8th, 2012 at 05:15pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    :(
    So sad!
    More please!
    August 8th, 2012 at 04:21pm
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    O___O
    More women!
    August 6th, 2012 at 10:19pm
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    Moooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!
    August 6th, 2012 at 05:42pm
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