Love Triangle? No, It's More of a Line... - Comments

  • WeeklySweet

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    I'm the only one who comments.... OH WELL!!!!!! I liked this chapter. It's OK with the long wait... you were out having fun! :) I like the last sentence, how it's italicized. Can't wait for another update.
    August 14th, 2012 at 12:18am
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    Again, I'm really loving the description and getting all of their point of views in! It's very refreshing. You're a very good writer! I cannot wait for 5. Have fun at your Star Trek convention!!!!!!!
    August 10th, 2012 at 12:58am
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    You're really descriptive with this and I absolutely love it! I'm a sucker for detail!!!!!! I like how you have all three of your characters points of view in each chapter, yet you kept it in the third person at the same time. That's something I have an issue with, and I admire those who can do that. It seems odd, but I identify with your stalker, Diana. I have no clue why, I'm not a stalker in anyway... Except in reading lol. But I really like her personality. It's not something I've seen before. And Ellie isn't your typical Popular and I like that about her. I love the name Tristan, so score on that! I like how he isn't afraid to dress how he wants. . . you don't really see people doing that. They're generally afraid of rejection from their peers, and I like how he doesn't care. I also like how he can hardly talk to Ellie. It's really cute! I've subscribed, recommended and commented. I cannot wait for another update.
    August 8th, 2012 at 05:51am