Black and Gold - Comments

She opened up sooner than I was expecting. It's not a bad thing, but I just wasn't expecting it. At least she does have someone to talk to that isn't really a friend. The fight with Tilly was kind of a waste I'd both of their time. I don't think Tilly should have gotten as offended as she did when Hannah was really more looking out for her, but Hannah should've let it go. Also sad that she fell off the wagon again, but it was expected. Great update! :D

I loved this! I do not know the people, but the story its self was fantastic! I love music so anything related to music is just great. I would love to tour in Europe. Overall I thought this conveyed a great deal of emotion. Even though not all of the events are completely realistic the way you wrote it made it seem totally believable. The dialog and tone were constant throughout the piece which made everything flow really well. The ending was just so emotional. Amazing job!

I loved this! I do not know the people, but the story its self was fantastic!

I loved this! I do not know the people, but the story its self was fantastic!

At least she's getting clean, even if it is just to see Shane in her dreams. Though I think her fear of losing those dreams is going to hold her back from moving on, like she won't let herself which isn't good. Loved the update though! :D

Damn it all, the ending made me all teary eyed. :( But at least she had a little fun before she got upset again. Only two months? She really hasn't had the time to get over it yet either. Great update though! :D

Oh god, Shane killed himself? That's awful, and the reason she started drinking right? I can't even imagine how guilty she would feel. But at least she and Andy are on okay terms for the moment. Great update. :)

awww, i like this (:

awww, i like this (:

Well, at least most everyone's forgiven her. I though it was sweet that Jinx offered to be there if she needed to talk. But Andy's probably going to hold a grudge for a while now. Like Hannah needs that, but whatever. Great update! :)

@ Synful Shadows
Thank you :D
I love that song too :D I might sing it on karaoke when I go again :P.

I love that song you stole the lyrics from! I knew what it was as soon as I read it. But that flashback was really sad. Poor Hannah. :( But I'm wondering what turned her to alcohol, because she's got a really bad problem, as seen in that chapter. I loved the update though! :) Can't wait to read more.

I also have no idea who the band is, but I agree with the person below me; I really like your writing style, she's right, it flows. The layout is nice too and I am pretty damn fond with the main characters. Keep it up!

Wow, comment swap gave me something good to read! I really like this so far, even though I have no idea who the band is that you're talking about! haha. I really like the main character, a few parts actually made me laugh! Your style of writing is really easy to read and everything flows through really fluently. Keep writing cause this is great :-)

Oh is he really going to lose intrest because she likes to drink? I doubt it. Not with that ending, and it'll probably only fuel his interest in wanting to get to know her. Oh well, I now see how you used my comment. XD Great update! :D

Sorry for not commenting on the last chapter. I don't really know why I didn't, but something must've happened. Anyway, I loved both updates, and Andy's not fooling anyone. :P If he wanted to act like he wasn't interested, he shouldn't be staring haha. Can't wait to read more! :D

So what's the deal with the ex? I mean, she's obviously upset, but why? I'm guessing nasty breakup and that he probably did something really horrible. Loved the update though. :)

I love it so far! :) I laughed during the exchange between Hannah and Andy, mostly because she kept embarrassing herself. XD Can't wait to read more.