@ SabasaurusRex I get where you're coming from but this is this story of how Desmond Gallagher ruined her life and currently she's very happy and her life is in great condition. It's winding down though, only a few more chapters. Thanks for your feedback!
Ok, I don't mean to be rude at all with this, but here are my honest thoughts:
Wasn't the climax of the story Des and Ollie getting together? Because now that they are, (Which is fabulous if I might add), I kind of feel like the story is being strung along. Kind of elongated for no particular reason (unless there is another motive I'm unaware of). I feel like the story should have been at it's resolution already and these next chapters should be part of a sequel (maybe exploring the dynamics of the couple's new relationship).
I. just. feel. so. damn. happy now. Everything is beautiful now. They're together and it's all so beautiful. Des is beautiful. Now please update more and don't mess it up or I'll cry. Please.