Cold Hearts - Comments

I loved that you made Ronnie the bad guy, instead of the savoir; its not something i see a lot with main characters. I'm kind of a sucker for unhappy endings, so I loved that, but I also liked how you gave the readers and option, and the unhappy ending was kind of an alternate ending. I didn't really like Nat as a character though. I kind of saw her as a 'Bella' character, or a character without a lot of substance.

im going to miss this one he should have seen it coming

omggg ii am crying

Well, that was unexpected. I thought she'd turn the gun on Ronnie.

love this update soon please and thank you

more more more more more more and im going to miss this story

o: I love this story! It's really good, I can't wait for the next two chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (: xx

Holy cow, Nat! Ronnie is giving you an out! Take it, godddammit!

omgg its good i love your story r u planning a squeal

Ooh, bring the last two chapters on! :)

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!

Love this please update soon

Ronnie broke oh my goodness. This is really good.

Okay I know something is up with Ronnie! It seems that he is trying to comfort her before something huge happens! I look forward to the next update!

Ronnie is up to something. I hope he doesn't hurt her really bad.

I can't believe Ronnie. After all those times where he hurt her and probably left her with mental scars, he wants to change now? That's just not fucking right. Seriously. Nat needs to leave him. Love has blinded her. Sigh.

Ronnie is an asshole. I can't believe she's still with this guy. I am so hoping Max figures out what's going and gets her out.

This chapter is very bittersweet! It shows a somewhat softer side to Ronnie that he doesn't want Nat to see. So she has already given up that Ronnie will ever love her but she stays because she knows deep down that Ronnie needs even though he denies it all the time. I wonder if Max is going to help because he was pissed off when he saw those bruises which got Nat in trouble with Ronnie! I look forward to the next update!

I loved it <3

Loved it