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No Matter How Many Breaths You Took, You Still Couldn't Breathe - Comments

  • Gxradxway

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    I like this!

    But some advice, space your paragraphs more. It helps with reading it. :)
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:11am
  • words as weapons

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    More please... please don't make me do the puppydog face I really liked this chapter
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:11am
  • justeva.

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    i like this a lot it's really good (:
    August 15th, 2012 at 12:31am
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    I really like this like alot plz dont stop writing
    August 11th, 2012 at 10:58am
  • Green_bullet

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    KEEP WITH THIS. please:c
    August 7th, 2012 at 12:53am
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