Tainted - Comments

I love this. I feel that some parts are slightly rushed but other then that, great. I plan to read the book that inspired this. Jimmy seems adorable and I just want to squeeze him. lol Keep it up, can't wait for more. Subscribing!

Oooh, sneaking out to party with the guy your crushing on...exciting. I cant wait for the next update.! and I loved Jimmy in this, what a little meddler...lol and Im wondering what got Brian all pissed off and/or worried. Cant wait for more:D

can't wait for the party chappy!!
wonder what got Brian's panties in a twist, lolz

I got a giddy for her...maybe the teacher has a problem with Bri hanging out with Ramy

The only thing I can think of for Brian to get mad is that the teacher said something about him hanging out with Ramey. As for the rumors well that can be anything really. Knowing high school kids and the way the guys look most likely it has some thing to do with drugs, sex and/or anger issues. I'm excited for this party to happen, no clue what's going to happen, but I'm up for anything!

Oh lord, I can only imagine the things that will happen next. Awh, I feel bad for BriBri, stupid jealous bitches.

Well the only thing this chapter truly accomplished was giving me more questions. Like what the rumors are and what made Brian mad. Oh and what's going to happen at the party? XD But I liked that she got to talk to Jimmy in this chapter. I most definitely love him. I'm kind of curious about his intentions in wanting to know if she liked Brian and telling her Brian was interested were though. Loved the update! :D

Loved it

I want to know what is up with Brian. Jimmy is awesome as always. I loved the update and I'm looking forward to more. :D

omg what is wrong with brian?!?!?!?! & what are the rumors! things i must know! i love this story and its only the 4th chapter. just wow. i think things will get all kinds of crazy at the party. so excited for the next update :D

Oh god! Yes, Jimmy had a lot to share with Mo, :D I belive the teacher told him to stay away from her and bla bla .__. teachers messing around in whatever they are not called to, like Bri's relationship xD

Haha I love Jimmy he never fails to make me laugh, I loved when he got all giddy when Mo told him she liked Brian lol. I do wonder what had Brian all pissed though, maybe something with his family? or perhaps he had a run in with his ex? either way I hope he doesnt end up taking it out on Mo (love the new nickname btw)! Im so stoked to see whats going to happen at the party, I suspect Mo will get blasted drunk thanks to Jimmy and Brian, mainly Jimmy lol and then have a hot make out shesh with Brian, at least thats what I hope lol. Awesome update hon! =)

Not long at all. I loved it. Relationship/friendship is just fine. I enjoy this story muchly. Please continue. :D

I don't think you're going too fast with their relationship/friendship at all. It's all falling into place nicely and it's very realistic.

Marrying this story, k? :)

OH SHIT THIS WAS ... AWESOME!! ;D
Can't wait for more, No! You're not going to fast in their relationship it's fine! :D Now I really gotta say I'm having a serious crush on Brian, right now (Not that I didn't have it) but Oh fucking good! Anyways... Next chapter soon.

Holy shit this is amazing! I love this so much, easily one of my favorites!!!

I keep loving this story more and more. I loved how she doesn't exactly catch onto a lot of his jokes and the innuendo. The fact that she kept embarrassing herself was cute. And it was nice of Brian to help her out, even if he's got some ulterior motive, which I just know he does. Loved the update! :D

awh brian is so cute teaching her how to play :3
i really wanna know what they did in the first chapter!! brian does have trouble written all over him haha. update again soon :D

Some would say your moving to fast but i like the pace your going at...this chapter was too cute.