Tainted - Comments

This chapter was too cute! It was nice of Brian to help Ramona with her guitar playing, such a sweetie =). I also like how he nesses with her lol she gets so awkward and shy around him, its hilarious haha. It was cool too how they how got on well during dinner, I can see them all being friends =)

Awe I loved that update. Update again soon <3

I stumbled onto this and love it...I haven't read the book this is based around, but I did read the description for it and have to say it sounds a little scandalous! lol. love it, cant wait to read more and see where this goes! More soon please. oh, and I think your writing is great..:)

Randomly found it. Randomly loved it... MORE SOON! :3

Ahh I really want to know why they're in trouble!! Awesome writing skills!!
Update soon? :)

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TheBeccaBeetlejuice

glad i found this story. very intrigued to know what happened that got them in trouble

awh that was a cute chapter! hmmm brian is very forward and seems to know what he wants. i think he is going to get her in a lot of trouble & i wanna know what that trouble is! your writing is excellent! update again soon :D

Loved this chapter!!! Please update soon! :)

Oooh the second part was better than the first! Ramona and Brian are so cute! I can't wait until you post again. :D

I love this! Brian and the guys seems really nice to her, but looks can be deceiving, so I guess we will see how long that will last. I have a feeling there will definitely be some corrupting going on here lol. Im very interested to see where this will go! =)

Brian seems pretty nice. But considering that's she in trouble because of him, I'm wondering just how long it'll take until he and the guys started doing things worse than smoking on campus. I think this chapter made me even more curious about what kind of trouble she gets into. Great update! :)

Brian seems like a really cool guy right now along with the rest of his friends, but how long will it last? This update made me laugh a bit and it really makes me want to see how everything will work out. I mean after all she got sent to the headmasters office, so something big must have happened. I'll be waiting for more of this story.

Okay everything makes more sense now

Loved this update. It was good. Looking forward to seeing what made her go to the headmasters office..lol.

If any confusion arises, think about putting a little heading above the chapter to state how far back in time things are. It will help readers visualize it better.

Loved the update. I can't wait for more babe, this is so good :D <3

Okay, I am SO intrigued! I am excited to read more! And if you want, I could make you a banner. Just message me with what you want. :)

Well, that chapter's definitely going to be a way to get someone hooked. I'm actually really curious about what's going to happen in this, and I'm probably going to get that book now. XD Can't wait to read more! :)

I wanna what happened. Looking forward to more.

I'm really feeling this story so far, the first chapter has me locked on and I'm looking forward to more. I wonder what Brian did and where this story will go?

i like your writing and the way you've planned out the first chapter. hooked readers in easily!
i wanna know what happened so you have to keep writing :D