Raised by Wolves. - Comments

  • Greenwolf7

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    Nice story
    Hope it gets updated xxxx
    November 17th, 2013 at 09:09am
  • Nevaeh_Flow_foREVer4

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    ERMAGEEEERRRRDDD!!! Julia that was amazing! >.< Well done my friend, well done. I applaud the dramatic twist. Great way to end the chapter! Trust me, this chapter was nearly perfect ;D
    December 19th, 2012 at 09:41am
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    Ooh lala sexy time with beau lol. I'm kinda relieved she didn't go that at with beau though. I think she should be with jacky but its it story. Anyway great update like always can't wait to read more xD
    August 20th, 2012 at 12:39am
  • hellz_belle

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    WOW!
    AND YOU PEOPLE SAY I'M THE HORNY ONE?! lol
    FREAKING WOW! OMG WOW! I think that's pretty much all my mind can come up with right now.
    VERY WELL DONE! My hat off to you! Round of applause.
    August 19th, 2012 at 06:36am
  • hellz_belle

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    Ah Jacky how simple minded your plan is...I can almost see it falling apart at the seams right in front of me.
    A different point of view always spices up a good story.
    It was very well done and I am very excited to see the next update.
    Again...Ah Jacky so simple minded. *shakes head sadly*
    August 19th, 2012 at 04:43am
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    amazing update!! and i find jacky's jealousy adorable but hes still a prick lol
    August 19th, 2012 at 12:46am
  • Nevaeh_Flow_foREVer4

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    I likes it alot!! I loved when Beau was pretty much like "u wanna the sex"! lol
    I loved the turn it has taken and nice touch on bringing Bless the fall in!
    Job well done :D
    August 18th, 2012 at 05:38am
  • hellz_belle

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    Hmm...a very interesting turn of events bringing Blessthefall into the story but a very interesting turn at least.
    Heehee sexual tension. *sighs* Haven't we all experienced that at one time or another. Two alphas in one house? I'm pretty sure there are things that are going to be going down in that house.
    XD I can't wait. Nicely done. Cool Stay cool.
    August 18th, 2012 at 05:26am
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    I love this !! I feel Jacky wants Jane by the way he growled when Beau held Jane's hand, update soon !!!
    August 18th, 2012 at 12:53am
  • Nevaeh_Flow_foREVer4

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    that was marvalous darling, simply marvalous!!
    I loved the way Yvette had Ryan wrapped around her finger n how sweet he was to Jane.
    The nerve of them chaining her up like a bad animal!!...oh wait lol. jk jk
    also i liked the way u handled Jacky
    i loved it!! i'm panting for more!! xD that sounded wrong but u get it lol
    August 15th, 2012 at 06:07am
  • hellz_belle

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    lol
    Poor Horrified Little Ronnie Radke.
    Nice Showdown With Jacky!
    NICE!!!
    August 15th, 2012 at 05:03am
  • Nevaeh_Flow_foREVer4

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    AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!! THAT-WAS-EPIC!!! I loved the action!!
    the silver chains are a bit harsh for the family that isn't suppose to hurt her isn't it? I liked it though. It shows the irony in the whole ordeal!! Love love love love loved it!! update soon woman!!
    August 15th, 2012 at 03:41am
  • hellz_belle

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    JACKY PUPPY'S!!!
    RONNIE PUPPY'S!!!
    In a house filled with wolves the drama never ceases to amaze me.
    Very fishy ending kiddo. I think I need to buy a little camera to look into this ladies and gentlemen. Nicely done.
    August 15th, 2012 at 01:32am
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    stupid cliff hangers!! grr. I absolutely loved it!!
    that last part was such a shocker to me that i jumped when i read it lol. that was a fun chapter though. i wonder what happened to the one you were supposed to have killed?? i guess i'll find out. DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE WOMAN!!
    August 14th, 2012 at 07:20am
  • hellz_belle

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    NOW THAT IS HOW YOU END A CHAPTER!!!
    *round of roarin' applause*
    BRILLIANT WORK NICELY DONE!
    Heehee Inari and Ronnie constantly bickering like an old married couple. What's the story there huh?! lol
    Can't wait to see what's up that sleeve of yours. ;)
    August 13th, 2012 at 04:56am
  • Nevaeh_Flow_foREVer4

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    one word to describe this: WESOMAZING!! THAT WAS EPICNESS EPIC!! that totally caught me off guard and i can't wait for the next chapter. hope u don't mind the short comment, i'm not much of a comment writer lol. love u!!
    August 10th, 2012 at 04:54am
  • hellz_belle

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    Okay this started out a lot like the book I'm reading; totally awesome...totally romantic...and then the next thing I know BAM and I'm sitting there thinking WTF JUST HAPPENED?!
    As I'm sitting here I am applauding your epicness and I shall raise a glass of Cherry Pepsi to you!
    Impeccable work! Nicely done! And An EXCELLENT performance!
    Cannot wait for what's in store next! Surprise me m'dear SURPRISE MEH!
    August 10th, 2012 at 04:49am
  • Nevaeh_Flow_foREVer4

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    I LOVED this chapter!! It appears u've proceeded to turn the heat up ;) I can't wait to see how Janette handles herself with this boy!! epicness!! and u had to add THAT in didn't you? lol
    August 9th, 2012 at 08:34am
  • hellz_belle

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    ALRIGHT! In The Word Of Zacky V. "DO IT!"
    What Can I Say About The Chapters I Have Read...Are There Even Enough Words In The English Dictionary To Describe Such Epicness? OF COURSE NOT! This Beautiful Piece Of Work Makes Me Speechless Every Time.
    The Main Character's Inner Turmoil The Inner-Demons That Follow Her Makes Her Relatable To A Lot Of People Especially Teenagers And Young Adults Who Are Constantly Struggling To Find Themselves.
    I Am Very Proud And Impressed And I Wish To See What Else You Have Up Your Sleeve.
    August 8th, 2012 at 09:19pm
  • hellz_belle

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    :O
    HE WAS SO CUTE! The Music Guy!
    I WANNA READ MORE!
    August 8th, 2012 at 08:33pm