I like the story line very well, but your grammar needs to be worked on quite a bit; and there are a bit too many asides. Other than that, it's a cute story.
February 11th, 2013 at 03:29am
Joker's Little Girl - Comments
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I love this, the thing with Bane adds a whole new twist :) hope you update soon!November 11th, 2012 at 04:01pm
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Please update this soon!November 9th, 2012 at 11:29pm
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I really like this. If your still looking for a villian name for Jezzie I think Jinx, or Jinxx would be really cute and it would go with the Joker. :D Hope you update soon!October 14th, 2012 at 03:26am
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Uh, you might want to work on the grammar and stuff, but other than that, this is fairly interesting.September 12th, 2012 at 10:05pm
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loved it!! :)August 29th, 2012 at 07:03am
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loved it!! :)August 29th, 2012 at 07:03am
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Not bad, not bad at all.August 29th, 2012 at 06:03am
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I love this Fan-Fic. :3
You're next chapter should be Bruce's P.O.V or maybe it should be Joker's because he hasn't had one yet. o.o
Just write the next chapter, please. :3August 23rd, 2012 at 12:35am -
niceee. I like your writeing style.August 21st, 2012 at 12:49pm
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awesome chapter!August 9th, 2012 at 07:06am
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This is really interesting! :) I can't wait for more chapters!August 9th, 2012 at 04:59am
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OMG OMG OMG ive been waiting for someone to write something like this! its better than what i would have imagined! love it! please continue! <3August 7th, 2012 at 11:30pm
