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  • Miss Eerie

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    I like the story line very well, but your grammar needs to be worked on quite a bit; and there are a bit too many asides. Other than that, it's a cute story.
    February 11th, 2013 at 03:29am
  • Kittyn96

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    I love this, the thing with Bane adds a whole new twist :) hope you update soon!
    November 11th, 2012 at 04:01pm
  • vannabug3194

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    Please update this soon!
    November 9th, 2012 at 11:29pm
  • Kittyn96

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    I really like this. If your still looking for a villian name for Jezzie I think Jinx, or Jinxx would be really cute and it would go with the Joker. :D Hope you update soon!
    October 14th, 2012 at 03:26am
  • Alsoldey

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    Uh, you might want to work on the grammar and stuff, but other than that, this is fairly interesting.
    September 12th, 2012 at 10:05pm
  • YourVengeance

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    loved it!! :)
    August 29th, 2012 at 07:03am
  • YourVengeance

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    loved it!! :)
    August 29th, 2012 at 07:03am
  • TyMaeTrains

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    Not bad, not bad at all.
    August 29th, 2012 at 06:03am
  • TyMaeTrains

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    I love this Fan-Fic. :3
    You're next chapter should be Bruce's P.O.V or maybe it should be Joker's because he hasn't had one yet. o.o
    Just write the next chapter, please. :3
    August 23rd, 2012 at 12:35am
  • ToTheMoon

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    niceee. I like your writeing style.
    August 21st, 2012 at 12:49pm
  • marina2351

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    awesome chapter!
    August 9th, 2012 at 07:06am
  • Red The Small

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    This is really interesting! :) I can't wait for more chapters!
    August 9th, 2012 at 04:59am
  • marina2351

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    OMG OMG OMG ive been waiting for someone to write something like this! its better than what i would have imagined! love it! please continue! <3
    August 7th, 2012 at 11:30pm
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