Comrade - Comments

@ PourquoiBella
You're welcome! :)

@ TBPFelton18
Thanks so much! :)

I just finished reading your story and loved it. It was very well written and a very good read. :)

@ Shirrin
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Hahaha that was fantastic! You even made me go back and finish the show so I knew what was going on. I usually try to end my comments out with advice on writing, but I can't see anything wrong or needing improvement with this!

So heeey, I'll start of by saying I have no clue who this is about. I was trying to catch up on my anime obsession but I seem to have just lost that spark. Oh well. Either way, I'm glad I picked to read this specifically, the plot is very interesting and I absolutely love your writing style

Keep writing and good luck!

@ Marisyana
I'm happy for any review you give! I appreciate you taking the time and I hope Mibba ships up! >:O

Sorry for the double review (I'm still enjoying the story) but Mibba is giving me fits and fits and fits and fits and fits and fits and more fits and even more fits than that because apparently my reviews are too brief to let stories go, LOL!

@ Marisyana
Thank you so much for your kind words! :)

I'm not a big anime fan (although I seem to be surrounded by them). You write very well and the story is very entertaining--keep up the good work!

@ deck of cards
Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment! I'm just about ready to post another chapter, so I'm glad you're sticking around! :D

I gotta say, I really like how you write, it's just my kind of style. I've seen that a lot of people have been writing anime stories in the first person. You know, like 'I woke up and yawned.' haha. You use words very well and it flowed. Yu Yu Hakusho was one of the anime's I liked a lot when I was younger and haven't thought about it in a while, so it was nice to see a good fan-fiction that was easy to picture. Anyways, keep up the good work! I'll certainly keep reading to see where you go with it!:)