Hello there. That was really interesting, amazing, superb, excellent, perfect, awesome... There were a fem writing mistakes but you can fix that. What I liked was your writing style and the way your descriptions and dialogue flow. I loved it and I'm really glad you post every day. Also, this is a mafia story isn't it? Just my thing xd Inform me when you post please because with my phone subsciptions don't work. Thanks in advance. Xd
August 10th, 2012 at 12:50am
