Drabblings of a High School Teen - Comments

@ discoveringclouds
really? :) I wonder if it's because I linked it here or because it's just regrowing there ;)

Wow your story Hidden Love that you linked has almost 2000 views! That's insane!

I really enjoyed this. It was short, so it definately fit my short patience level when it comes to stories. Also, while it was short you were able to artfully tell the story between the two characters. I loved it. You're writing style is quite lovely.

You got that across, smoothly. The thoughts concerning him were cut and placed right there.

@ discoveringclouds
hehe thanks :D hmm i'll take a look, i tried to make it seem like the reader was reading along with hte thoughts of the character, like how we think without grammar :P

Wow four years whirred past. There was so much left unsaid, but things said! Oh my gosh! This is so real.

A little editing, shortening some sentences. :)