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  • Jayme112234

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    Loved the latest chapter... i hope venus is okay. update again soon please x
    September 16th, 2012 at 02:21pm
  • stubbornlove

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    Love, LOVE your story!!!! Can't wait for more! I can't believe she attacked her! Can't wait to find out what happens next.
    September 16th, 2012 at 08:43am
  • SweetCyanide93

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    OMG!!!!! That selfish little bitch! how could she? GAH! I hope Alpha Henry seriously puts her in her place. I mean come on, how could someone with such a large age gap possibliy be meant for eachother? gbfskjagbsjgbh;fskb I'm soooo frustrated right now.

    Update soon! I really, no I need to know what happens next!
    September 16th, 2012 at 07:46am
  • SingAlong

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    I just love reading this and hope you write more soon. I like how I feel connected to the characters because you give them all well written personalities. They each are their own individual and have their own quirks.
    September 16th, 2012 at 04:16am
  • Lady of Lapis

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    more! more! <3
    September 15th, 2012 at 01:34am
  • RCL.

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    I wanted them to be mates man I want more
    September 13th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Aww I'm so happy they didn't think any different about her after finding out about her having a defect...
    That's sad about Alpha Henry losing his mate.
    I hope Brady finds his mate XD
    I love this story.
    It gets better every time i read a new chapter XP
    Update soon please
    I need to know what happens before i lose my mind o_O
    September 13th, 2012 at 05:56am
  • IceDeath.

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    I love it!!! I can't wait to read more, I'm gonna recommend and everything. XD Update soon please!!!!!
    September 13th, 2012 at 01:23am
  • SweetCyanide93

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    Next chapter! hurry! i love this and need more. haha can't you see my love foe this story? Anywho update soon!
    September 12th, 2012 at 11:47pm
  • fuyu-aki

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    cant wait on the next one i love this story is a take on the wolf that no ones done before
    :) have fun writing:)
    September 12th, 2012 at 11:15pm
  • s t a rSTRUCK

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    i love this story....i really want her to be Tristan mate for some reason i think it will be cute lol
    September 12th, 2012 at 09:39pm
  • grape1

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    THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Mr. Green
    September 11th, 2012 at 07:06am
  • IceDeath.

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    Love this Story. I definitely can't wait to read more.
    September 11th, 2012 at 04:30am
  • fuyu-aki

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    hi hi cant wait on the next one! have fun writing
    September 11th, 2012 at 03:46am
  • o_.

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    I love the jealousy in the air from both sides. So intense!
    September 11th, 2012 at 03:37am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Lol wow I love this chapter XD
    Update soon
    I need to know hwta happens next XP
    I hope Tristan doesn't hurt her
    When will Brady and Alpha Henry find out about her not having her wolf?
    September 11th, 2012 at 03:17am
  • RCL.

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    Update soon please I liked this chapter
    September 11th, 2012 at 03:10am
  • Give me Therapy...

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    I love this story, Henry is so cute and sometimes he pisses me off the way he acts like a pedo!!! xD Brady is totally my favorite, he is just so cute!!! Tristan is pissing me off full time though, like seriously, he has some anger issues. I hope Venus get's some super awesome kick ass powers so that everyone can shut the hell up oh and that she becomes Luna for her pack. Anyway awesome story, you had me reeled in by just the first chapter, I absolutely loved it, enjoyed it and laughed along with the characters. Amazing story, beautifully written and most importantly amazing author!! Can't wait to read more! (:
    September 11th, 2012 at 02:34am
  • SweetCyanide93

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    I love this! Especially when Tristan was getting all bent out of shape when the teacher wasn't letting him be Venus' partner. Haha, makes me happy :D
    Please update soon, I enjoy reading this ALOT!
    September 10th, 2012 at 10:31pm
  • Jayme112234

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    I hope you update soon... I'm enjoying what I have read so far x
    September 10th, 2012 at 10:02pm