If We Ever Meet Again - Comments

  • LiacideXIII

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    Holy shit!
    I sat down and read this all in one day!
    I did not see that ending coming, but it was fantastic!
    Men can be confusing and she doesn't deserve this bullshit!
    June 29th, 2014 at 02:54am
  • PrettyGirl

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    Awesome story loved it
    October 24th, 2013 at 08:23am
  • Nia_Flores

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    WOW... WOW... WOW... this story just kept me on my toes. never knew what was gonna happen! & I LOVED IT!!! It was an amazing story.

    I seriously didn't expect Chris to react that way... I hoped he would forgive her or try to work things out, or give her an ultimatum... but DAMN!!! She ended up with nobody!!!

    I can't wait to start reading the sequel. Great work! You rock!!! Punk
    August 12th, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • EzioAuditore

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    I think my heart just broke a little bit. Cry

    I am so happy to have read this story though. I literally sat until 4am last night, still reading. But I couldn't finish the last chapters until now, And wow... wow. Hail
    I'm a sucker for romantic, dramatic stories, really. Put together the fact that this story is about Brian and Chris Hemsworth... Let me just marry you, okay? Happy face
    I wanna mention first what I think has put a very different light on this story, but I'm not sure if I can put my thoughts down into words correctly. Your story was somehow different. Usually when people write such triangle drama stories, they often fail to get at it realistically. They rush through things, and the drama gets completely out of hand. But you did a great job. I love how you created a very real feeling life for all of the characters in the story, connected them and made this story truly come to life. You learn so much about Ash, and you didn't give her the typical life either. You made sure to give very great details. I think literally the only thing I think there should have been different about this story, is that I would have liked a little bit more insight to Brian. But maybe you wanted it this way and it's just me.

    I'm surprised that you have been able to actually make me go for Ash/Chris.... At first I still really loved the whole drama between Ash and Brian, because you described their friendship so...special. But Chris totally won my heart over with the following chapters. Truth be told, in the end I'm totally for Brian and Ash though. Fuck, when they finally got it on I was like OMGYES Thumb up
    Cannot not ship them. I'm really looking forward to the sequel, since it is what I was supposed to read anyway, hehe.

    As much as I love Ash/Brian... I don't really like Brian's character in this story. This is really weird, I guess. Because I love him at the same time. I love him for fucking shit up and starting the drama, because I loved it. But he's kind of a...pussy? Maybe I'll like him more in the sequel.

    To come to an end, finally, haha. This story is just brilliant. Really great work, honey. You should be proud. :) I loved this so much. Your writing itself is really amazing too. You're totally making me jealous. But reading well written stories helps me learn to get better as well, so I'm not jealous in a bad way. Keep at it, you're amazingly talented!
    August 1st, 2013 at 01:34pm
  • a7xf0rlife

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    Finished this story! Can't wait for sequel, I think you should write it in first person but do whatever you want, it's your story Very Happy
    April 14th, 2013 at 04:07pm
  • helena_88

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    ah damn! brian is a fucktard!! lmao!! Mr. Green something tells me that they're not done with each other though.. :P

    write it in the way you feel most comfortable Wink
    April 9th, 2013 at 10:21am
  • laniebaby

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    First person.
    April 9th, 2013 at 04:56am
  • synystergates__1001

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    OMG.....I can't wait for the sequel to this story I have a big feel ing it's going to be amazing... :)
    April 9th, 2013 at 04:00am
  • Quoth Raven

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    Whatever person you decided to write it as, I'll be there! It's really more of what you're comfortable with :D
    April 9th, 2013 at 12:36am
  • StillTryingToBreathe

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    Oh my god o.o and first person is good with this kind of story (to me anyway) I loved this story and can't wait for the sequel!
    April 8th, 2013 at 10:58pm
  • MoMo_92

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    I think u should write the sequel in first person and tht was an intense final chapter
    April 8th, 2013 at 10:06pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I think you shoould write the sequel in first person :)
    April 8th, 2013 at 08:22pm
  • Little Miss Shadow

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    OMGOMG!!! Brian had no right to say that! I'm completely on her side right now because after all that he goes and says something like that? He finally has a chance but he just turned it down...can't wait until the sequel!!!! And first person is good, you're more in the character's head then.
    April 8th, 2013 at 08:16pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Oh my gosh!! This chapter made my eyes water and I can't believe that happened!! Brian is such a meanie face, douche bag for doing that to her and I wish that it would have ended differently, but no...I think it turned out great!! I really can't wait to see what is going to happen in the sequel! And I think first person!
    April 8th, 2013 at 08:15pm
  • VengeanceIsMine

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    Oh snap can't believe its over just like that I expected more of a fight lol
    Loved this
    February 25th, 2013 at 03:31pm
  • helena_88

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    kicked out of the house :P not surprised by his reaction..
    wonder what brian will say Mr. Green
    February 25th, 2013 at 09:51am
  • StillTryingToBreathe

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    Oh geeze :/ I still like Brian better. I hope they get together
    February 25th, 2013 at 05:50am
  • Quoth Raven

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    I still, for whatever reason, believe that Chris did do something...wrong. Anyway this was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait to see the last and then start the sequel!!!
    February 25th, 2013 at 03:24am
  • powerofkisses

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    Yeah... Personally I know this is a Brian story but he's a bit of a-hole... And she did cheat.. Hmmm how can you be with someone who helped you cheat in your current relationship and expect them to probably do the same again..
    February 25th, 2013 at 03:01am
  • xSweet.Afterlifex

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    OMG... that was... I hate to say this but I actually love the way this chapter went, most likely due to the fact that some people really suck at writing fight scenes like that. That one was epic. I loved it, and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, and the sequel!!!
    February 25th, 2013 at 02:55am