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  • Let It Fall

    Let It Fall (100)

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    I really like this, you should keep writing it. :)
    May 24th, 2013 at 08:54am
  • antiwords

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    First thing's first, I love your layout. Your first couple of lines are great too, and they really set the stage right. You introduce and flesh out characters really well for an opening chapter and I like your style. Is the chapter meant to be called "Dirth Path" or "Dirt Path" though?
    August 10th, 2012 at 03:31am
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