I do like Avenged Sevenfold! However it has to take a lot to get me into a vampire story. I've noticed links have been included to give us some visuals, just a tip, try to use detail to show us what the room looks like instead of pictures. I think the dialogue flows well! I think this story has a lot of potential, and I hope you continue it
February 8th, 2016 at 03:06am