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  • PamelaJaneF

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    I've never read anything like this, from this point of view, and I've got to say I think it works wonderfully... It's so powerful and beautiful and actually brought tears to my eyes.
    And oh my lord, this layout is so very powerful.
    I used to self-harm regularly and reading this has definitely hit me deep inside. I hope you continue writing, I'd love to read more
    June 30th, 2014 at 11:20am
  • Alsoldey

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    Oh my God! This story...I've never read anything like it! Well darling, you have succeeded in making me tear up a little--well that's a downright lie--you've made me cry. This was beautiful, the simplicity of your words, the images (mostly the header though I mean, that's powerful!), and...man. Your story is beautiful, you are a great writer, and...sorry. I just can't get over this at all.

    Coming from someone that once self-harmed as well...this is pretty touching for me. It definitely hits home, and I'm so glad I stumbled upon this. Great job, love, I'm definitely recommending this lovely piece of literature!
    December 17th, 2012 at 07:11am
  • the blissfully dead

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    Having gone through the same problems myself I can really relate to this story and I think it's a beautiful read. I love how it was in He's point of view and I think this story is very special. Thank you! Keep updating :) xoxo
    August 15th, 2012 at 01:58am
  • Jennifire101

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    This is really good. It was short, but it had good detail and portrayed feelings. Something that I find hard to do in short chapters, or at all. I really like that the thing that wants to help her isn't human. (A cat, right?) I found that unique and got me interested! Update soon! :D
    August 14th, 2012 at 09:07pm
  • yodailicous

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    That was really unique. It's so nice, I loved it. It reminded me of when I talk to my dog at night. Its just so relatable, you always trust your pets more than you do any other thing. For me, at least.
    August 14th, 2012 at 08:47am
  • MarieBelle

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    Awe, this story.. it's so realistic, something someone can relate to. I hope that Ellie gets better! So detailed, I love it! I am glad that he, or she, is there for Ellie too. It touches a serious problem, and I can't wait to see where it leads to. Hopefully she gets help or the other person can help her to stop harming herself.
    Update soon!
    (Sorry, I accidentally entered it before rereading what I wrote to make sure I got everything)
    August 14th, 2012 at 08:45am
  • MarieBelle

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    Awe. I hope that Ellie gets better! So detailed, I love it! I am glad that he, or she, is there for Ellie too. It touches a serious problem, and I can't wait to see where it leads to.
    August 14th, 2012 at 08:41am
  • Grand R

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    Awww, He is adorable, this whole story is adorable & brilliant. It's written very realistically; it actually reminds me of one of my friends that had a cutting problem. Keep writing <3
    August 14th, 2012 at 05:40am
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    Simply adore this! It's raw and in a complete different view I'd love to see more :)
    August 13th, 2012 at 04:12am
  • Valiente

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    This is incredibly heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time. There aren't a lot of stories that talk about the relationship between humans and their pets. Your descriptions are perfect and I love your writing style. If you update soon, I will love you forever! -A
    August 12th, 2012 at 09:00am
  • warmaiden

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    Oh my goodness, Kylee you did it once more. I feel as I'd I'm Ellie and this "He" is someone who cares for me more than anyone, but is powerless to stop me from myself. After such a long time... I'm subbing to a beautiful story.
    August 12th, 2012 at 08:19am