September 12th, 2012 at 11:52pm
Our Secret Place - Comments
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Good story :)September 12th, 2012 at 11:30pm
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Heartbreaking...September 10th, 2012 at 11:51pm
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It's starting to make sense, so sad.September 4th, 2012 at 05:28am
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O.O GAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!!! That was unexpectedAugust 25th, 2012 at 12:19am
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Heartbreaking and kind of creepy...August 22nd, 2012 at 04:36am
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Interesting, can 't wait for more!August 21st, 2012 at 12:23am
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Your writing style is very poetic and I like how each chapter is short yet captures a lot of feeling and emotion. It's an absolutely beautiful love story. It's so compelling and I can't get over the sheer beauty of your writing. This is fantastic. Definitely recommending and subscribing. You have done a wonderful job with this.August 20th, 2012 at 08:34pm
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Hmmm, is she pregnant?August 19th, 2012 at 05:03am
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I'm really intrigued now. I want to know why there are bruises on her body. I don't quite understand the is or was but I'm hoping you're going to tell us. The story seemed like it started off slow at first but I like the pace of what's happening.
It's a little frustrating to not know what's really going on in the story and oh my god, I want to know so badly. I have so many questions. Haha. I'm going to subscribe just so I can keep up and find answers to these questions.
You have a very unique writing style and I really enjoy it. Especially since the chapters are short and so are the sentences without too much detail. Really keeps the reader on their toes.
There are a few grammatical errors. Always double check before posting. Keep up the good work. :3August 16th, 2012 at 02:32am -
Now it's starting to get weird and different lol. And I think the difference is becoming more clear like you said :)August 15th, 2012 at 09:38am
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I don' completely understand the difference between is and was, but I like the simple love story and find t cute. :)August 12th, 2012 at 11:51pm
Thankyou, I'm glad you liked it :)