Our Secret Place - Comments

@ fearless-forever
Thankyou, I'm glad you liked it :)

Good story :)

Heartbreaking...

It's starting to make sense, so sad.

O.O GAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!!! That was unexpected

Heartbreaking and kind of creepy...

Interesting, can 't wait for more!

Your writing style is very poetic and I like how each chapter is short yet captures a lot of feeling and emotion. It's an absolutely beautiful love story. It's so compelling and I can't get over the sheer beauty of your writing. This is fantastic. Definitely recommending and subscribing. You have done a wonderful job with this.

Hmmm, is she pregnant?

I'm really intrigued now. I want to know why there are bruises on her body. I don't quite understand the is or was but I'm hoping you're going to tell us. The story seemed like it started off slow at first but I like the pace of what's happening.
It's a little frustrating to not know what's really going on in the story and oh my god, I want to know so badly. I have so many questions. Haha. I'm going to subscribe just so I can keep up and find answers to these questions.
You have a very unique writing style and I really enjoy it. Especially since the chapters are short and so are the sentences without too much detail. Really keeps the reader on their toes.
There are a few grammatical errors. Always double check before posting. Keep up the good work. :3

Now it's starting to get weird and different lol. And I think the difference is becoming more clear like you said :)

I don' completely understand the difference between is and was, but I like the simple love story and find t cute. :)