October 18th, 2015 at 12:22pm
Buried Alive. - Comments
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Update soon!April 14th, 2014 at 05:00am
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I'm not going to lie - I had no idea what this story was until I re-read my last comment. Then everything clicked back into place and I got super excited!
Let's get my one complaint out of the way before I get to the good stuff: when the chapter switched to Sam's point of view, I thought we were still with Brian. And that super confused me, especially when Sam started to be mentioned. It all made sense in the end of course, but the beginning of that part threw me off.
I really loved how the interview played into that part, though. And the way you portrayed the band at the beginning was just perfect. XD I remember why I loved this story so much now, and I'm so glad that you got around to updating again!
I hope to see more of this soon, because I imagine it's just going to get better and better. ^_^ Thanks for not quitting, even when the time got hard to find!April 14th, 2014 at 04:29am -
OMG... this is great!!! I haven't read anything like this before... & I think it's absolutely amazing! You got me captivated since the summary. It's so dark & mysterious... it's fabulous!!! I can't wait to read how she carries on her revenge. I love the way you describe every single detail, gave me goosebumps!!!
I can't wait to see what's & who is next!!!May 14th, 2013 at 07:39pm -
So, I got stuck writing my chapter and came onto Mibba to find something to read for a while. I saw this recommended on my updates feed and clicked through. I started reading. And the prologue? Had me absolutely hooked.
I know you asked me not to read your stuff, but in my defense - I didn't realise this was your work until I was already onto the first chapter, and there was no way in hell that I could stop reading.
But let me comment on the prologue first. I thought it was absolutely captivating - both in the way that it was written, and in the way that it leaves such an air of mystery that you just have to wonder at what has happened.
I can't deny, it also inspired me. I got a whole new story idea from reading it, like a slap in the face. So thank you. =P Not sure if I'll end up writing it yet, but I wanted to let you know - because it's been a long time since I've been inspired so strongly, and you managed to do it. I think that's amazing.
Onto the first chapter and the mystery intensifies. I love that this first was meant as a message, though I doubt many people (in the story, I mean) will pick up on it so quickly. And that excites me. XD It makes me eager to see what comes next!
I can't believe you doubt yourself as a writer, because this...this is absolutely brilliant.
Fantastically well done. I really hope to see more soon!February 17th, 2013 at 04:10am -
I love this C:January 12th, 2013 at 02:38am
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I've read my fair share of horror stories on here and I have to say, this has already become one of my favorites. It's only two chapters in but holy shit. I felt like I was actually watching a horror movie. The emotions and descriptions were brought to life perfectly. Even when he was about to enter the bedroom, I was at the edge of my seat, fearing that something bad was about to happen. I almost wanted to scream "Don't go in there!" like those obnoxious people in movie theatres.
I cannot wait for the rest of this story to unravel.
Love the plot, love the writing. This is really, really good and I am officially hooked. [:December 30th, 2012 at 06:11pm -
See I told you: you're truly amazing, and this chapter is one proof of that! :)
Please please please update soon I CAN'T WAIT! *-*December 29th, 2012 at 04:14pm -
Personally, I found this ground-breakingly breathtaking! I love how you made it seem like everything was just some kinky-fuckery, and then it all kicked off with some wonderful killing with a creative streak. What I like about it, like most serial killers starting out. She is a tad messy about it, of which she could easily clean up over the kills. Because, she learns to control it, the urge to go wild. She like most serial killers, say Hannibal Lecter, have an obsession. His was eating flesh, her's is blood. Both, turns them on which is what comes with being a serial killer. They find pleasure, through inflicting pain on someone else. Which I find especially clever, that you've used, in this fanfic.
And I can't wait for more.
Keep it up. Seriously.
:)December 28th, 2012 at 02:57pm -
I'm so ready to watch this character work! I can't wait!December 28th, 2012 at 01:20am
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Loved the update!! Cant wait for more!December 28th, 2012 at 01:05am
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I LOVE THIS!!! I can tell that this is going to be an amazing story! Update again soon!November 17th, 2012 at 10:15pm
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sounds amazing!update soonNovember 13th, 2012 at 05:30pm
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This is off to a fantastic start and I''m really looking forward to reading more and finding out just what they did to herNovember 13th, 2012 at 03:33am
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I really like this story.November 12th, 2012 at 11:27pm
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wanna know more! (:November 12th, 2012 at 11:26pm
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I'm in love! ♥November 12th, 2012 at 11:23pm
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Okay, i think I just died because this is going to be amazing and there is only just one chapter. I cannot believe how different this is already, how creative it is. the use of words and phrases. The idea of medication, and obsession. Its going to be an amazing fanfiction. Update soon :)November 12th, 2012 at 09:13pm
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Oh my god.
I'm in love.
The last line had me going crazy, I need moreeee!November 12th, 2012 at 08:49pm -
This was really good, sounds like the story is going to be great! awesome introduction to it! =)November 12th, 2012 at 05:11pm
I miss you. <3