Peine D'amour - Comments

Your writing has definitely improved since our adventures on quizilla and this story was well written and a bit heart breaking. Nonetheless good job :) & I love you <3 don't stop writing or I'll throw a dead possum at your face.

This was terrific. Your use of vivid immersion was astonishing and I am not a bit shocked. Wonderful, easy to understand story that was dripping at the seams with emotion. I want to read more :)

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Your grammar and spelling is perfect, and I like the idea of the book. The plot so far has no holes and is very good. Also the French twist is very nice.
I'm taking French this year, and I've been to Paris so I love the language/customs.
Keep on writing !(: