Runner - Comments

This is amazing. I'm so drawn to your writing style, the fluidity and selective detail. Can't wait for the next update =)

First of all I love the layout. Also your way of describing is great along with your metaphors and similes my favorite being 'She moves with fluidity, like a leaf drifting through the wind completely undisturbed.' It's short but very interesting. I will be looking forward to updates!

I absolutely love the way you write. Like, rippling through my skull like the distant thud of a drum is such a great imagery and selection of detail. This actually such an interesting story. Like how she can't remember anything. I'm a sucker for amnesiac-type stories hahaha. I'm subscribed :)

i really like this. the layout is gorgeous, firstly, and the prologue really got me interested. it was short, but it was just perfect to make my head snap up and get me to pay attention. i'm glad that the first chapter was longer though, i get annoyed when people just post lots of short chapters -_-;;

but i digress, your writing is lovely. it's powerful where it needs to be, but never overpowering, and never boring either. i love your dialogue too, it flows really nicely. <3

Wow. Your story is really intriguing! I really love your writing style. I liked the way the prologue made you think that she was running away from someone, then at first I thought she had been kidnapped? But now I think she's perhaps in a hospital-like environment. Really interesting! Keep it up. :)

That was a captivating prolog and first chapter! I enjoyed it, and I cannot wait for another update

I really like this! Your writing style really brought me in and I want to know what happens next! :D Keep it up! I can't wait to see how this interesting story progresses.