Comical Love - Comments

Ooo I really like the gif cover photo! What a great idea! Your layout is also great, makes the story easy to read. You are a great writer! Your story flows very well. There is great description! I'm not much into superhero stories, not even the movies! But you write so well I could see myself definitely getting more involved with this story! I hope you continue to write this story! You have a lot of potential!
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Keep up the good work!!!! :)

I love the gif cover photo. You're an amazingly talented writer. You really have a way with words. You do great job of bringing the characters to life. I love the background as well. I loved the line in chapter two "even if i was dead i still wouldn't come with you!" And your descriptions are very realistic. (sorry last comment wasn't long enough)

I love the gif cover photo. You're an amazingly talented writer. You really have a way with words. You do great job of bringing the characters to life. I love the background as well.

I love this! :)

Okay, I absoluetly love all the description. I love how you're able to catalouge the feelings in a way I'm able to really grasp. And I love the "I"m at a coffee shop, for coffee." line in chapter two, it made me laugh out loud for real.

I love the description in chapter four of the "shimmering maroon door." Overall I really really like this!

First of all, I really enjoy the layout. And the title is cute and witty. I noticed right off the bat you have an amazing talent for description. I was immediately hooked. You really captured how it feels to be in New York City. :3

This story is really good so far! I've only just read the first chapter, and already, I love the amount of detail you've put into each paragraph.

I also kinda liked how there wasn't much dialogue in the chapter, but that's just me.

I definitely will keep reading!

(I admit its comment swap, but I'm happy it gave me this one! :D)

i didnt get a chance to read the whole thing but this comment swap thing is great! it lets me read all these amazing stories i wouldnt normally read. i like the fact that im reading all of these differnt things. I really like what you wrote! and i will continue to read on UPDATE UPDATE! this is really awesome! its really addicting!

pretty awesome! i read this all! haha! its very awesome! all i can say is.. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!

heya. this was a fun story cool reveal on pp at the end. I would have somebody proof read this for you. I am usually not a stickler for grammar but there are some portions that seem extremely akward due to poor word choice, punctuation etc. additionally I think this section of the story could benefit by starting at the confrontation at the end, drawing the reader in, and then going back to the beginning as a flashback

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well kudos to the fact that you caught my attention when I dont read this kind of story...like at all, so very good job. You're a good writer I'll tell you that. So keep up you're good work, and keep updating. I wanna know how it turns out :D

Comment Swap brought me and I'm glad it did! I haven't read the whole thing yet, but so far it's very interesting! I'm super curious to know what happened to her and why she is the way she is. The scene with being so scared of the spider was really hilarious. Peter's already coming to her rescue. =3 Super excited to see where this goes! Keep up the good work!

I really like this and I would say more than that if it wasn't really late and I am pretty much struggling to stay awake. But update soon. They need to kiss. :)

I think out of all the characters Marvel has created, Spiderman is my least favorite. Aside from Marvel Girl/Jean Grey. I mean, I think I would literally rather hang out Shadowcat or Juggernaut before Spiderman. But I digress. There are many grammatical and spelling mistakes. Other than that, I kinda liked it.

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Like S a m said I don't like stories which grammar errors, but even though its still nicely written. I think I'm going to subscribe to this story. Amazing!! Keep up the good work

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I don't usually like stories with as many grammatical and spelling mistakes, but I do like this. I haven't seen the new spiderman, but 'bloody hell' is British and it seems out of place in this story to me.

Like I said, you have A LOT of mistakes. My suggestion is going through and rereading everything before you post. As for what has been posted, reread it and edit it. maybe ask a friend, adult, or teacher to help you as well.

Comment swap brought me here, and I was really excited at the thought of a spider-man fan-fic. I haven't read one before.i like the writing style and this is really good, but at times it can get confusing not knowing about what skylar is before hand. I haven't finished it all, so I don't know if it gets less confusing later on but ya. Otherwise its good :)

why can't skylar get over the fact that shes in love with Peter Parker? Its so there and the fact that he loves her too. I can't believe she kissed a nother guy. Gahhhhhhh. I don’t think Christopher and Skylar are really made for eachother. Christopher seems like a jerk. He doesn’t believe Spiderman is a good guy which everyone knows he is. I love the friendship between Skylar and Stacey. Please update soon.

I could only read the first Chapter but so far I think it's truly amazing! Defientely subscribing! :)

The summary is eye catching and your spelling and grammar is basically flawless with only a couple errors here and here. I love the idea to write a Spiderman story, it's really original. The characters are really believable. I love the story so far! I'm definitely subscribing.