Living with Monsters - Comments

Love it!

Bad spelling and grammar :T examples:

"no one was in to here our argument."
"I watched as she contuied"
"countuied my work."
"he would have a dad to protect him"
"he didn’t fallow me"
“Love you to, jerk!”

I'm really not happy about Gabriel. Not happy at all.

Great chapter
Update soon
I hope she gets back with Emmett,
Emmett can always be the dad for the baby
Can't wait for to come

I just wanna cry b/c of Gabriel :'( Can't wait for more :)

please update..........I'm dying here

please update asapp....that now stands for as soon as pissibly possible...pissibly was supposed to be possibly

You spelled Italy wrong in the first chapter's title name. *facepalm* Kill Bella. NOW. At this point, Emmett obviously can't have her any more. I don't know what kind of closure they might or might not have, but their only happily ever after is if you murder Gabriel and their child so...no. Now...SERIOUSLY, A PRIEST?! AND PRE-MARITAL SEX?! WTF IS GOING ON HERE?!?!?! I lurve Paul. He's so cute. (don't tell him I said that). Spelling errors still distracting. I'm so pissed all of my notes got wiped out cuz my mother effing laptop shut down. Let me sift through this again...I like Aro. I'm glad there wasn't a super weepy reunion between Edward and Dahlia- and that she was strong enough to move on. That takes a shit ton of courage and strength and she did it. And she deserves to be able to move on, not be like Bella (Stephenie Meyers's version) and stay stuck in the past, re-living her pain and have to give up her present and future for the past. I think, maybe, you should give Gabriel super-powers. I don't think I'm going to look around for all the quotes again, but I do love a lot of Dahlia's comments. It certainly never gets boring. You really have to explain that whole priest-sex thing to me. OH and I do remember saying that if Dahlia takes one more single shit from Bella, I am jumping into your story and killing her myself. Vampires, Wolves and Volturi be damned, I will knock her dead. Um...yes, that's it for now. Update.

Just found your story and cant wait for more

yay i want this to be longer than monsters in the rain and i kinda want stupid bella to die already she shoulda ate her when she turned into a wolf lol.

I love it XD
Bella needs to get losted... and i don't mean in the woods..Haha XP

OMG I love this series!! And it keeps getting better!!

She's a wolf! Wow, i really didn't expect that at all. Update soon!!

Wow that was crazy lol
Bella needs help oh she's going to die...
Wow is a wolf XD
I love this chapter
Can't wait to find out what happens
Jacob or Edward shouldn't be mad at her because Bella started it all so if they are i will have to beat them with a iron pole lol XP

so, you're totes finding a way to bring Gabriel back, right? I don't want to go to jail for murder just yet...

oh.......BELLA . MUST . DIE .

Kristen Stewart too.....HOW DARE SHE CHEAT ON ROBERT PATTINSON!!!!!!!!....im still not over that

I think we all just learned Bella's a little scared brat.I hope Jacob isn't angry at leels cause if he is i'm gonna have to hit him with frying pan several times!

nice addition! update as soon as you can

if jacob gets mad at her about what bella tells him im gonna wanna punch him in the balls but i have a feeling hes gonna side with her which is so him lol.

MAY YOU WALK THE PATH OF A THOUSAND AND ONE LEGGOS FOR KILL GABRIEL!!!! update soon please. AND BRING HIM BACK! I WILL FIND YOU AND I WILL KILL YOU!

I didn't expect Gabriel to die. Update soon!!

I'm actually not upset that Gabriel is dead. It just gives Emmett a chance to win back dahlia, which is what i want