A Rose Without Thorns - Comments

  • swell

    swell (150)

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    Wow, this story is absolutely gorgeous. I love that the way you connected the picture wasn’t so much in a literal sense but more symbolic, and the way you’ve tied it in with Forever Young as the song was unexpected but was beautifully incorporated. There was this impeccable flow and the whole story was just worded perfectly and overall, there’s nothing bad I can even pin point in this. Thanks for entering!
    August 20th, 2012 at 11:46am
  • Loudness War

    Loudness War (100)

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    I really loved this! Love the metaphors especially 'We planted our sister like a seed'.
    August 13th, 2012 at 01:48am