Don't Let This Memory Fade Away - Comments

  • Nanook

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    Whoaaa...
    I just stumbled across this, and decided to check it out. And I am not disappointed with what I've read.
    This idea is seriously so unique! I've read stories where people go and meet ATL after they've become famous, but they've all been done in a wish type of concept. This one involves time travel, which is seriously rad!
    I'm surprised this story didn't get more comments; it's seriously so well-written and again, such a unique concept, that I would think MORE would have left feedback or checked it out.
    But yeah, next to that unique plot line, it's also sweet as well. Her chemistry with Alex at the beginning seemed so sincere (minus the whole fight scene, but prior to that and then when they hung out and stuff), and then with Jack... it's lame that Alex didn't wait for her, though. :/ I'm team Alex in this, though, lol. And upon getting to the last update, it seems she was on the brink of realizing that, and helped Jack understand she didn't reciprocate the same feelings. While Jack was sweet to her, the vibes just didn't seem the same with him since the beginning, so that's why I'm also thinking he's a better friend for her as opposed to romantic interest.
    I'm bummed this wasn't continued, to see what would've happened next... but I have faith you could come back to it. I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know I will be here to read if you ever choose to continue it. I would love to know what happens next with her and Alex, how it all ends up working out with the whole time-travel thing, like does she have to go back or stay where she is?... hmm...
    It has been a while, though, so I understand if you lost inspiration... but just wanted to leave feedback and let you know I think this is a great story. :) You're an amazing writer, truly, and such a creative thinker for using this concept, as I haven't see it done for an ATL fan fic before, and I've read quite a few.
    Maybe this comment will inspire you to continue it someday. :) I'll be here.
    January 21st, 2018 at 05:42am
  • mrs.stiglitz4207

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    Comments swap sent me here! I love this story! Its so intriguing and a very interesting take on a fan fiction. I'm sad that you haven't updated in a while, I'm dying to know what happens next! I just saw a few grammatical errors nothing to be ripped for. They story flows I can connect with the characters without actually knowing them, I don't really listen to all time low but I'm tempted to check them out thanks to this story. I really like this story a lot and I really hope you update soon:)
    March 6th, 2016 at 06:33pm
  • mrs.stiglitz4207

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    Comments swap sent me here! I love this story! Its so intriguing and a very interesting take on a fan fiction. I'm sad that you haven't updated in a while, I'm dying to know what happens next! I just saw a few grammatical errors nothing to be ripped for. They story flows I can connect with the characters without actually knowing them, I don't really listen to all time low but I'm tempted to check them out thanks to this story. I really like this story a lot and I really hope you update soon:)
    March 6th, 2016 at 06:32pm
  • mrs.stiglitz4207

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    Comments swap sent me here! I love this story! Its so intriguing and a very interesting take on a fan fiction. I'm sad that you haven't updated in a while, I'm dying to know what happens next! I just saw a few grammatical errors nothing to be ripped for. They story flows I can connect with the characters without actually knowing them, I don't really listen to all time low but I'm tempted to check them out thanks to this story. I really like this story a lot and I really hope you update soon:)
    March 6th, 2016 at 06:32pm
  • Neo Tanner

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    This is a pretty good fanfiction, even though I haven't personally listened to All Time Low. Might have to look them up. The plot is strange at first, but enjoyable as it's a nice twist to a fanfic. The premise of the character going back in time to meet her idols. I've only read up to Chapter 3, so I dunno if a little chaos ensues, but typically it does when time travel's involved!
    June 19th, 2014 at 01:34am
  • Packers

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    I looked at the character page and Farah is so pretty! I really like this story, despite not being the biggest All Time Low fan. I think it was well written and I can definitely say I will read more of this when you update! (:
    April 25th, 2013 at 11:39pm
  • sydni.

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    Comment swap~

    I love All Time Low, they're my favorite band ever. I wasn't able to get through much of this due to a splitting headache I have, but I think you did well from what I've read so far. Your layout is simple and easy to read, it didn't hurt my eyes at all. I don't get why you did the / / when Farah was thinking to herself, but to each their own. I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes. Good job!
    March 24th, 2013 at 08:37pm
  • l0stinNeverland

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    Oh my god I can just imagine Alex actually being like that as a kid XD great chapter!
    August 18th, 2012 at 12:41pm
  • stayawake95

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    Thank you, and thanks for pointing that out! I edited a lot of the writing because as I had said I wrote this two years ago but I did miss a few things. Please, if you find any more, let me know!
    August 15th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • l0stinNeverland

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    So this is a very unique plot and I absolutely love it, I'm a fan of All Time Low so was already up for reading it but when I found out the plot I was surprised, I've never read one like this. I only found a few spelling mistakes like in chapter two you spelt 'sight' as 'site'

    Keep writing and good luck
    August 15th, 2012 at 02:02am