Sparx for Life - Comments

It's no problem, I really love this story <3

@Tiffany Purdy

Thank you so much for your support! It means a lot, since I really don't have much of anyone reading this. So thanks! <3

OH my gosh I was so excited to see an update on this story! Update again soon please?

I just read all seventeen chapters! You can't leave a girl hangin' like this! Update soon please? Lol

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There was some small errors. which is no big deal. But in chapter 11 during the sexy scene he called her Bri and I know that's her nickname. It's not a big problem, but I don't think that he should've called her that, that isn't a sexual name, and once again that's her nickname. That isn't very attractive I would find that to ruin the mood if he called me by my nickname during sex. Other than that it was very good. Its quite interesting.

@ WeHaveAHulk
Thank you very much : ) Yeah I probably need to go back and put more descriptions in on who they all are....I will when I get the chance. I have like 3 stories I am trying to finish and that includes cleaning up the other half of this story. Thanks again for your kind words!

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I dont watch or know anything about wrestling so at first I was just like 'who is everyone?' No matter though because I used my intelligance with the help of google. I liked the cheesy parts the most and your a really good writer to say you wrote this as a 'preteen'.

Keep writing and good luck

@ crazyvengeance
Thanks! I wrote this all a long time ago when I was a preteen. I just cleaned it up a bit and thought I would post it up to see what people thought. : )

hey!! Comment swap here!! i love randy Orton lol. um so i like the way its going so far and i say that you should keep going and just do what ever makes sense to you.

Uh oh I wonder who hit her? Matt? Ken? Ahhhhh please update I wanna know. Update. ASAP. Please.

@ LunaNomea
Randy Orton is kinda cute. :) and yea meeting John Cena was a dream come true to me. He's left handed too. I found that out when I watched him sign his pictures. I had to get 2 just so I could have one at home and one a work. So when I'm feeling down I just look at the pictures and I'm feeling happy again.

Psycho babble sorry but yea the story was awesome and your welcome.

@ DaRkAnGeL448
: ) Thanks for your kind words! That does sound exciting, meeting John Cena. I obviously really like Ken Kennedy, and I was supposed to go meet him, but at last minute they changed it on us and I ended up meeting Randy Orton. Which was awesome, cause he actually told me that if I go to Harly Race Wrestling School he could get me a discount. Unfortunately, I didn't want to stay in Missouri...but at least he said it, which made me almost scream like a little girl! : )

Really good. I could never really get into wwe. But I did go to the one in roanoke va. I got to see John Cena in person. I almost fainted it felt like my heart was going to explode. I love that man. LoL. update soon. ASAP. Please.

@ SoWrongItsLottie
Thank you! That's very nice of you to say. : ) And I am not much into wrestling really either anymore, but I wrote this when I was so I thought I'd post it, even though in my opinion it's not my best work... Thanks again for your kind words. They were very encouraging. ^_^

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When I saw that this fic was based on the WWE, I must say I was really hesitant about reading as I am in no way shape or form a fan of WWE, although a couple of cousins and friends watch it. (I'm more of an American Football girl :D)

Anyway, upon reading this, I couldn't really find any mistakes in it. Your spelling and grammar are good, the storyline is original (which is REALLY good) and your writing style is unique.

Keep up the good work!