Bubbles. - Comments

  • swell

    swell (150)

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    Firstly, I’d just like to start off with that I can’t see the font – it seems that it’s been set to white. Nonetheless, I liked this piece. The connection to the song and picture was well done, and I liked how the narrator was quite calm about her impending death. There are a few spelling mistakes, but overall I enjoyed the mood and tone to this piece. Thanks for entering!
    August 16th, 2012 at 11:27am