Nightmares - Comments

Comment swap brought be here. I really like this. I've never seen Doctor Who (though I've been told I need to by many) so I was a little antsy about it, but I do like how you've written it.

this honestly made me tear up a bit. this has a lot of feeling to it and I know this contest was a while back, but I really hope you won it. (-:

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I really love this! I don’t read much Doctor Who fan fiction but of those that I’ve read I think this is my favorite. I absolutely love the way you wrote this. We remember Nine as the fun loving man that he was with Rose around but I really like how you decided to write about before Rose. Really good job!

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I was estranged by the layout at first, I wasn't quite sure of what to make of it and could be alot better. I'm a major Doctor Who fan because I have a story myself, and you should add more description to what he is saying to himself and how he feels. Maybe you could have added in the Nightmare or dream he was having before he woke up, that would have made it alot more interesting.

I found this piece very interesting. It made me think about the Doctor after I had finished reading it, as he seemed like a memorable and quirky character. I like that he seems to be mentally ill, or at least has two personalities with him and I like the way you’ve tied that through the song. The tie to the picture was a little off though, as while I saw the connection between the man sleeping, I didn’t see it with the girl. Overall, I enjoyed this. Thanks for entering!

Comment swap sent me here. I'm not really a Doctor Who fan so I kind of didn't understand this. I read through anyway and it was really good. I'm sure I would have loved it even more if I was a Doctor Who fan. Your spelling and grammar are perfect, I didn't see any mistakes at all.

My only suggestion is maybe getting a layout, it might add a little to the story. Otherwise this was really nice, good job!

this is really good :)

This was cute xD I don't read much DR fictions but this one was very readable because it's so easy to relate to. I suffer from an over active mind too, hence me being up this late, so I think I found this fiction at the perfect time!

I know the mind ramblings and the feeling of just wanting to tear things to shreds, and trying so hard to compose yourself. The poor doctor :(

This was well written and perfect for us midnight readers. Good job!