Man of Travel - Comments

Recently, I have been organizing my own trips. I really enjoy this process. I can spend hours looking for cool locations and booking tickets. The last trip I remember was by car to the UK. I had planned this trip in great detail and was looking for a company and a website where I could rent a car for a long time. And then my friends advised me to use Rental24.co.uk where I easily chose a car from Enterprise. Now, having such an experience, I want to go on a car trip again

I don't know anything about it either. I am currently very busy planning my trip to Scotland. I contacted with Highlands and Islands Jeep tours and booked a tour for me and my parents. They say this company arranges stunning trips. So we are really looking forward to getting that pleasure of traveling to Highlands.

Where is it? Is it the UK? I need a driver on a jeep to take me to Scotland on my honeymoon trip. Just let me know how much you would charge, right?

I liked the ambiguity of this piece, particularly with the man’s choice of words. You were very direct yet simplistic with the plot, but I enjoyed the lightness of it. There was a spelling mistake “dispite” is spelled “despite”, otherwise the grammar and spelling was well done. I loved the last line, how he was running from his heart as well as his past. Thanks for entering!

I really enjoyed this!

I feel like it would make an excellent prologue for a full length story. I want to know all about the man and the places he left behind and the somewhere that he's going.

I really like your writing style. It's very simple and to the point, but very lovely as well. I adore when people can describe something so simple and make it so interesting like that.

Good job!