Blue Jeans - Comments

I'm over here from comment swap and I am ever so grateful that it brought me your amazing story.

To be honest I haven't heard of the Fandom you're writing about but I am enjoying your style of writing all the same. It reads like a wonderfully painted water color story unfolding before me.

The use of description you've been using is just sensational and vibrant. I am in love with your style and think it to be just divine!

I see no fault in your grammar or spelling and your layout is easy on the eyes which makes it even that much more of an enjoyment to read.

I am looking forward to reading more. You're a great writer so all the best to you =]

Brad is so hot

:-)

This is a really interesting story. I really like the amount of detail and the emotion in it - which is a hard thing to get right and you did a spectacular job on it! I can't wait to read more of this and I even think I'll subscribe! :3

I am really glade comment swap gave me your story to read. I love how the background blinds kinda with the story. :-) I love how all how you describe things to the point that you can see it in your mind as you read. I don't really know what fanfiction this is for but, I really can't wait to read more.

omg asap rocky

i like it so far

So, here we go, I'm from comment swap and the first thing to catch my eye was the lay out. it's super cool. I really dig it and it's not at all overwhelming. So kudos.

Secondly, I adore your first few sentences. It's a little awkward, but really nicely done. I don't know what song this is based off of , but I am compelled to listen to it. That's awesome that your story has enough power to do that. I will proceed to read this. Good work.

Comment swap brought me here :) You are a very talented writer. As said before I loved how you were descriptive and I was able to picture what was going on. I cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Wow, you are definitely off to a great start with this story! You explain the scenes so well and I can actually picture it, something I highly enjoy when reading a story. You have amazing writing skills and I cannot wait to see where this story goes.

I'm definitely going to subscribe and recommend.

Great work! :)

You're a good writer, and this is definitely a strong opening chapter. I enjoy it. As the person before me said, you provide a lot of good descriptions which really helps to visualize exactly what is going on. I also love the dialect, it helps connect better with the characters. Keep up the good work!

I'm here from the comment swap. I really think that this story is great so far! There were some minor grammar and punctuation mistakes that I saw, though nothing too major. I do really like the way you describe things, it's nice to be able to picture what's going on.

I hope you continue! Excellent Job!

BTW, Comment swap brought me here and I really hope it brings others. I can't believe no one else has commented or recommended this because your writing is brilliant. I hope you continue on with stories like this one. Tata for now! : )

Wow this is amazing. Your descriptive nature is inspiring. Keep up the good work. ^_^