This was a nice story . Confusing at times. Ending wasn't what I expected. Just seemed like it was the end of a chapter not a story. Going to start the sequel now.
Okay I must say these last three chapters blew my mind! First off, you are too modest! Your threesome was very good and well written. Mmmm I'd love to be in a threesome with them myself LOL. I tell you one thing though. I am going to be pretty sad when this story ends because it's become one of few that I race to the computer to check and see if you updated lol.
omg! how can it just end :( when it feel so unfinished. Jimmy loves her damn it! There's so much unfinished drama to be written. but i wont be mad because your still an amazing writer
Awww. It's over. I'm sad. I agree with kiki_101293 there should be a sequel! I feel something could be brewing between Jimmy and Maxine, but that could just be me wanting more of this amazing story.
Oh my! You put me through torture at the beginning of this chapter! I was all like omg Jimmy and them all together lol. I don't know why I was so anxious. It's a good thing I think, but I was like!!!! wasn't expecting that. Haha well now that the idea has been put in my head, I'm anxious even more to see how that turns out. =P Great update Doll.