Good In Goodbye - Comments

  • catastrophe.

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    @ samlo2009
    I am so glad you liked it! I wasn't really sure if I wanted to put one of the Pyatt's in this because there is hardly any love for them and a part of me wondered if just an average character would be better, but then I realized the lack of love for them, especially Tom, was the exact reason I should use him! I was also really torn on who the boy in the break-up would be to the point that I was changing it up until I posted it. Hahaha. I'm just glad someone other than my friends like this :)
    August 14th, 2012 at 09:04am
  • samlo

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    Loved it! I'm a sucker for Tom Pyatt and was a little turned off by the way he was acting. But I'm glad it worked out in the end for my second favorite Staal, [Jared being my favorite.} :) I could actually see this going further, but if not. it was short, sweet and to the point.
    August 14th, 2012 at 06:22am
  • la dispute.

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    This was really good, Kelsi. You managed to get a ton of feelings in a one-shot! I felt bad for Marc when Tom came in, and then when he began getting distant, I hoped Marc would be the knight in shining armor. Lol. And he was. Sort of. :P I'm glad that they came together in the end, because that's how it should be. One bad relationship or situation doesn't have to ruin everything. Piece by piece, things can get put back together! Anyways, I'm rambling, but I loved it and you! :)
    August 13th, 2012 at 07:38am
  • sarahbeth6

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    Short, sweet, and perfect. :)
    August 13th, 2012 at 07:22am