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  • ll-Fantasia-ll

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    @ Word!Smith
    Sorry, it is my first story. I probally won't go any mor ein deapth about it or add anything...I just put it out there ^-^ thank you for the comment :]
    September 5th, 2012 at 12:59am
  • Word!Smith

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    Your character development is really excellent, I hope to see where the story goes from here.
    August 26th, 2012 at 11:40pm
  • Word!Smith

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    And maybe add more conflict, rather than does he like me???
    August 23rd, 2012 at 05:16am
  • Word!Smith

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    I like your writing style, but maybe you should try writing a out a more engaging subject, rather than a boy.
    August 22nd, 2012 at 01:24am
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