A Little's Enough - Comments

so comment swap got me here. i think this is a really good story. i love the background and the writing. and i love teigann and Gerard. they are very good charaters. good amount of writing.
but could have spaced it out a little more but overall very good.

@ amykart
thank you! :) hopefully the rest can keep up with everyone's expectations.

Comment swap brought me here and I'm glad it did! You have a really good writing style, with a perfect balance of dialogue and description. I really like Teigann's character and the plot is definitely awesome. I like the layout too, it's really cute and it makes it easy to read the story! Good job

@ KilljoyMaiden
Thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means to me :) Next update will be up super soon!

All I have to say, is WOW. Holy crap, this story is just flipping AMAZING. I seriously almost cried when I reached the last updated chapter. Please, I beg of you, write more! This story is simply perfection! :D

Hello, comment swapper here. I would like to start off by saying that I like the way you spelled her name, Teigann. I personally prefer when there's more detail than description because sometimes the dialogue overcompensates and then it begins to look like a 13 yr old wrote this, but you did the opposite and provided balance for the most part. The only thing I didn't like was the formatting, it really should be double spaced between each paragraph and dialogue because after a while it begins to seem bundled up and hard to read. But good job regardless, doll.

It was refreshing to read a story that had more dialogue than description. Plus I am a huge fan of short chapters. I applaud you on being able to get across so much in each chapter and still have them short. The only thing that seemed problematic was your spacing. After reading so many chapters, it easy to misread a sentence cause the lines are so close. Otherwise awesome job.

Comment swap brought me here and I'm glad it did! You have a really good writing style, with a perfect balance of dialogue and description. I totally like Teigann's character and the plot is definitely cute. I like the lay out too, it's really classy and it's easy to read the story! Good job babe!

-comment swap-

To be totally honest, I was hoping for a short and sweet read, but this was actually really good! I admit, I wasn't able to finish it, but what I read was super sweet and well written. And trust me, that is a compliment lol. I also absolutely love the layout. Easy to read, not too distracting like other layouts. Keep it up!

I like this! Teigann is sweet. I don't normally like it when names are spelt strangely, but it didn't distract at all from the story. I love Mikey in this! I'm at chapter 13 now. Will read the rest later.

The only thing I didn't like is the POV change in the middle of a chapter? It's no biggie, though.

Keep writing!
(awesome layout by the way :D)

^_^ Thanks.

At first, I thought that the beginning of this story was a bit unrealistic. But then I realized that some people instantly feel that connection to another. I'm not typically a fan of My Chemical Romance fan-fics, but I find myself to actually be liking this one.
*subscribes*

@ LittleMissSnapShot
thank you ^_^ next chapter will be up tomorrow

You have me interested :) love it!

@ vampire.money
thank you ^_^

I'm still reading! Keep going with it, I realllyy like this story :) xx

amazing

Ray's right, they have SO much to catch up on...and you've left us hanging!! Update soon :)

thanks!! ^_^ there will be an addition tonight i hope.

This story is great :) Can't wait to read more!