Well.. That sounds kind of suckish.. Probably won't be much of a date.. More of a "be jealous Elena" thing.. Or that's the thought anyways. Good chapter.
Uh! Special thanks! Hehe ^^ so, Damon is being Damon. I wonder how things will go with Elena. Hmmm... Things will difinetly be Intersting from here. The only thing I guess I could even get close to complaining about is the length of the chapters. But that is simply because I'm a longer chapter reader kind of girl. Anyways, good chapter.
Drama on the horizon. I wonder what she'll do after seeing Elena and Damon? Or maybe they'll notice her and solve it that way for a while. Idk, many possibilities right about now. Good chapter.
Uh! Paragraphs with spaces! Thank you! It's easier to read now and you've got a good writing style starting/going for this so far. The build up is pretty good so far as well. Wondering just what you have planned for this. Good chapter.
Besides the few spelling mistakes and that I prefer paragraphs with space in between them (it's easier to read), than this is pretty good so far. It's got a little detailing and the introduction is easy to follow. I'm giving it a go via subscribing and I look forward to seeing how this will go and see of I'll stick with it or not.