Little May - Comments

This is a great read. It gave me goosebumps as the plot unfolded and I began to understand. I think you should have got first place for the contest. The other entries are good, but yours is the best. There were no grammar issues, the description kept my attention, and the storyline flowed seamlessly.

This is a good story! I like the plot you used for it, although I didn't quite get how you might have incorporated Spirited Away in there xD Still, I guess that's because it's a happier movie. And My Neighbor Totoro is actually kind of stupid but really cute ^-^ Anyway, good job on the story! Very original plot; I got chills reading it, and I loved it