Hey... so comment swap brought me here i have the same things to say as the person below, i dont understnad whats going on becuase i dont know what Pierce the Veil is? i like the layout a lot, but i feel like the banner kind of clashes with it because the background and story border blend, but then you have the banner just plopped there.
Howdy, I'm from comment swap, here to give my two cents.
So I really like the word choice, but have no idea who the fuck this is about. I'm guessing Pierce the Veil ? I dunno. Doesn't matter to me, because you have rad character development. So it really doesn't matter at all.
So I'm really digging your writing style. Kudos on your story, keep up the good work,.
Oh, Sian, you fucking IDIOT! *Groans* You don't do that, darling. Think about Jaime.
Unfortunately I had an idea like that (GF runs off randomly) a few days ago, with Jaime and everything, so I guess I'm not gonna write it now. Oh, well.
Oh my God, Sian is an idiot! I feel like something horrible is going to happen to her in Florida. But at least Jaime is starting to realize what she has to go through every time he goes out and gets shit-faced.