Rebel Love Song - Comments

It's a good story so far but as the comment below said, just make a new paragraph every time someone new speaks or you start in with a new idea. And maybe make the font slightly smaller? It's a little distracting but otherwise, good story! I hope you continue with it!

I really like this story! Please continue!
But as a tip, it's really hard to read right now. You should start a new paragraph when you change speakers because having random speakers throughout a paragraph is really difficult to follow.
Apart from that, I love this so please please continue!

I really liked the story nice job pleas continue.