How to Be a Princess - Comments

yay! i so love this. best princess ever. lol

oooo... like the new layout.

YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!! I missed this story so much, I always laugh so hard reading it!!!! So glad you're still writing, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!

hehehehehe.... i likie. lol... i laughed so hard i almost fell of my bed.

I may or may not have fallen off my chair from laughing so hard while reading this.

@ littlegirlbri
Thanks for the constructive criticism, I changed some aspects of the layout and I'm waiting on someone to make me a banner before I change the whole thing. I corrected the capitalization on the chapter titles; however I won't be changing the actual titles. My mom suggested those and she'd be very hurt if I changed them. :) Thank you for your opinions though though.

I look forward to anything else you have to suggest.

Alright, so since I'm short on time at this moment, I'll start out with the main page. I think your title is interesting, and the summary is to the point, though it might be nice to have something descriptive, because the wording is boring and doesn't really draw me in.

The titles are all good, except chapter two and three should be changed. It's really boring to see "The Meeting Continues" [Continues should be fixed, by the way] and "The Meeting is Almost Done" because it's either one long chapter split up, or really boring. I think you should relate the title to the actual chapter, instead of the meeting. Like, what happened in the meeting.

The layout, also, only looks good if you close the comments. [That's the only because of the graphic position.] The light blue that you used for the title is really bothersome to the eyes, as well as the combination of the other colours chosen.

I know this wasn't all positive, but that's only because I don't have time to review & beta the actual chapters right now. I'll be back tomorrow (:

I got your story via comment swap, and I am glad I did! It is so funny and entertaining. It's refreshing to read something not so serious for once, a little comedic entertainment is good. I like hoe modern you have made the princesses :) Good job!

Oh my georgeous! XD that was epic. lololol

HAHAHA TOO FUNNY! Princesses these days... loving this! Can't wait for more! Hope you update soon!

HIGH FIVE MAN! XD BEST UPDATE EVER! XDXDXDXDXD

you gonna update soon?

Love the new chapters! Can't wait for more! :)

oh goodness hahahhaha

Ok.... that was cool! lololol. I hate rats. I feed them to my python while they squirm and squeal. -hehehehe-

I kinda like the idea of the prince being a chick lol but airplanes__ idea is amazing too...

I think it's funny that people have a problem with the hidden morals of the princesses, but never the prince.

I mean Prince Ferdinand was into Necrophilia. And Philip teaches us that sleeping girls are easy. Eric likes fish, so Icthyophilia is ok. And Aladdin was a Pathological liar. Adam teaches us that Stockholm syndrome is ok, and a great way to get a girl. and Charming just wanted a trophy wife. Shang is into cross dressers, so chances are he's in the closet, but unable to come out because it's disney. and Flynn was a liar and a thief who wanted a naive girl to be dependant on him... I mean, their morals suck just as much. lol....

just thought of that... lololol

I agree with airplanes__

The fairy godmother dies! bitch has to charm her own guy without any help whatsoever so she learns how to be princess-y that way :)

mwahahaha
I love it!

WHOA. I never thought I'd see the day that I'd end up reading a Disney princess fanfic, ever. I also assumed that if I ever did, by any strange chance, end up stumbling upon one, that it would be horible.

Boy, was I DEAD WRONG. This is GLORIOUS! Not only is this funny, but it helps the reader view the characters (and the original stories) in a way that we never did before. Not many people figure out that Disney fairy tales contain negative messages. However, you do. You have been able to illustrate how a story (or any work of art, for that matter) can have both a positive message and a negative one. This was such a good idea, and it is very well written. I am totally recommending this.

Keep up the good work.