How to Save a Life - Comments

  • Kstoletheberry

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    OMG. It just occured to me when I did the comment swap they had me read two of your stories in a row. I'm wondering if that's because no one actually uses comment swap or just a funky coincidence.
    July 27th, 2013 at 09:54am
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    OMG. It just occured to me when I did the comment swap they had me read two of your stories in a row. I'm wondering if that's because no one actually uses comment swap or just a funky coincidence.
    July 27th, 2013 at 09:54am
  • Kstoletheberry

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    The Fray reference. We're off to a good start. :) Uh uh. No. The first chapter begins repeating info already in the bio. Eliminate it from one of them. It's repetitive and makes me want to stop reading and is seen as amateurish. If you're not one...you should know better. If you are, pat, pat, you shall learn. :) * I know this is your styling decision and it's not all that important, but I suggest you left justify your writing. It makes it seem more professional and makes it easier for the eyes to follow. *
    July 27th, 2013 at 09:53am
  • ParanormalcyC6

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    @ b0-n-Arr0w
    Well thank you :D a bronze metal is better than none :)
    August 23rd, 2012 at 12:23am
  • b0-n-Arr0w

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    i really like this story just so you know. its number 3 in my fav 5 of stories i am reading
    August 22nd, 2012 at 11:41pm
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    @ SuperNovaEclipse
    Thank you :3
    August 19th, 2012 at 04:40am
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    @ ParanormalcyC6
    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
    August 19th, 2012 at 02:34am
  • ParanormalcyC6

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    @ SuperNovaEclipse
    I will probably update as soon as tomorrow, but today I'm taking a break from writing beacause it's my birthday :) and don't worry you shall understand soon enough.
    August 19th, 2012 at 02:04am
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    So far I like it, though for the life of me I can't figure out what could possible make this hard for her. Sounds perfect to me
    So update plz!!!
    August 19th, 2012 at 01:07am
  • heytheredelilah

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    This is great. Can't wait for the next update
    August 16th, 2012 at 05:59am