OMG. It just occured to me when I did the comment swap they had me read two of your stories in a row. I'm wondering if that's because no one actually uses comment swap or just a funky coincidence.
OMG. It just occured to me when I did the comment swap they had me read two of your stories in a row. I'm wondering if that's because no one actually uses comment swap or just a funky coincidence.
The Fray reference. We're off to a good start. :) Uh uh. No. The first chapter begins repeating info already in the bio. Eliminate it from one of them. It's repetitive and makes me want to stop reading and is seen as amateurish. If you're not one...you should know better. If you are, pat, pat, you shall learn. :) * I know this is your styling decision and it's not all that important, but I suggest you left justify your writing. It makes it seem more professional and makes it easier for the eyes to follow. *
@ SuperNovaEclipse I will probably update as soon as tomorrow, but today I'm taking a break from writing beacause it's my birthday :) and don't worry you shall understand soon enough.