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  • Starfeesh

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    Reading this chapter is like watching Maury, the whole time I was screaming I JUST WANNA KNOW WHO THE BABY DADDY IS! So far the sequel is excellent.
    September 9th, 2012 at 06:10pm
  • Juno

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    OK, if you don't tell me what happened, I'm packing a bag, flying to London, and beating the shit out of the blonde boy for absolutely no reason because this isn't real, but I'll do it anyway. Because this is killing me! Lord all mighty woman please.
    Great update. :)
    September 9th, 2012 at 06:00pm
  • State Of Grace

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    Aww, her and Niall are really cute but then I'm also wondering about what sage was thinking about, is it true that Harry scares her enough and that's why she didn't pick him? I just, ugh I love this story already update soon,!
    September 9th, 2012 at 05:57pm
  • hkychk

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    I was like sweet finding out who the daddy is and then it never happened!!! I'm dying here!!! Loved it and I wanna know what is going on with Sage like everyone else haha
    September 9th, 2012 at 04:44pm
  • young volcanoes

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    somethings up with Sage but I can't tell what it is. everyone else that commented seems to think so too. anyway, I can't wait to know who the father is!
    September 9th, 2012 at 04:30pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    This is great! I love it. I'm still convinced that somethings up with Sage and Niall, Like what like tonight's sky said. I love this and I'm so happy that you updated the sequel. I'm in love. :) Your stories rock so damn much it's insane. Haha.

    Anyways, update soon please. I'm looking forward to the next update! But you already knew that. :p
    September 9th, 2012 at 03:24pm
  • kaylelle

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    There's something up with Sage and Niall, I can feel it. And omfg I have to know who the father is! You're killing me, woman!
    This is so awesome already :D
    September 9th, 2012 at 02:51pm
  • wishful;

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    Before anything else, I would just like to say: OMFG I LOVE YOU FOR ALREADY POSTING THIS. I AM SO GLAD I CHECKED MIBBA BEFORE SLEEPING AGH. *end of fangirling*

    Oh my dear lord, I don't know who I want the father to be. If it was Harry, much more drama but it would also make sense if he was because Nicole probably still loves him (maybe the point of the story) but Niall, though - it would so much easier if he was the father and he'd be such an adorable dad. Either way, the baby would have an amazing father and Irish/Curly-haired uncle. 

    About the Niall not visiting their flat as often anymore, how Sage is so curious about and how she always jokes about Hazz being the father...there's something I sense there, but I can't be sure if it's just me or a true feeling in this chapter...

    Anyway, amazing start, flawless chapter, great, as always :)
    September 9th, 2012 at 02:43pm
  • forever.yours

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    So maybe I'm alone in thinking this, but I hope that it's Harry's baby. Don't get me wrong, I love Niall. But I feel like something happened between Sage and him, and neither of them had the decency to tell Nicole. I think the relationship with Niall is a great…distraction, from her feelings about Harry. I agree with Sage, maybe Nicole is frightened of how much she cares for Harry. Of course if the baby is Harry’s, the directioners are going to go batshit crazy. But I think the baby might actually be good for Nicole and Harry. She’d be forced to face her feelings and tell him (because I honestly think Nicole lacks the guts necessary to not keep the baby, it would absolutely destroy her.) So I feel like I’ve solidified myself on Team Harry. Onto your talent as a writer...

    I LOVE your character development. The only thing I could possibly love more is the intricate layout of the plot. The reader can tell you know exactly where you’re going and exactly how you’re going to get there. It’s nice to have little sub-plots unraveling with twists and cliffhangers that don’t seem random and forced. It’s clear that you are amazingly talented and know who you are as a writer. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter. So write, you fabulous writer you, write! (:
    September 9th, 2012 at 02:11pm
  • honeyjoons

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    Ugh. I hope it's not Harry's baby. She and Niall are perfect and that would mess everything up okay. I hope we find out soon though.
    September 9th, 2012 at 11:06am
  • thelovelyreader

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    Wow! Drama :-o I love it!!
    September 9th, 2012 at 10:23am
  • dawn of light

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    I love Sage. The way her attitude towards the whole situation was brilliant. It fits right on.

    The whole Chinese for dinner thing was perfect. Like stated, Niall hates it but Hazza loved it was down right a sign, yet I don't know.

    I'm still on team Horan. It needs to be his child or I'll just egfcosblgoevbadl.

    So glad this was updated. :)
    September 9th, 2012 at 09:48am
  • Caitosaur.

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    OH SDGHKJNVSLIFDUHK
    I NEED TO KNOW.
    And Sage needs to know because Niall's totally avoiding her after she was hospitalized and it was strange for him to be the first to know so he was obviously there and you might not think we notice these things but I notice these things and they make me really happy because it means that you, unlike me, actually think out where your plot is going.
    September 9th, 2012 at 09:24am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Excited for this to start! Please start it soon. :)
    September 8th, 2012 at 05:28pm
  • kaylelle

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    I'm dying for this to start! I'm so impatient xD
    September 8th, 2012 at 08:55am