OK, if you don't tell me what happened, I'm packing a bag, flying to London, and beating the shit out of the blonde boy for absolutely no reason because this isn't real, but I'll do it anyway. Because this is killing me! Lord all mighty woman please. Great update. :)
Aww, her and Niall are really cute but then I'm also wondering about what sage was thinking about, is it true that Harry scares her enough and that's why she didn't pick him? I just, ugh I love this story already update soon,!
I was like sweet finding out who the daddy is and then it never happened!!! I'm dying here!!! Loved it and I wanna know what is going on with Sage like everyone else haha
somethings up with Sage but I can't tell what it is. everyone else that commented seems to think so too. anyway, I can't wait to know who the father is!
This is great! I love it. I'm still convinced that somethings up with Sage and Niall, Like what like tonight's sky said. I love this and I'm so happy that you updated the sequel. I'm in love. :) Your stories rock so damn much it's insane. Haha.
Anyways, update soon please. I'm looking forward to the next update! But you already knew that. :p
There's something up with Sage and Niall, I can feel it. And omfg I have to know who the father is! You're killing me, woman! This is so awesome already :D
Before anything else, I would just like to say: OMFG I LOVE YOU FOR ALREADY POSTING THIS. I AM SO GLAD I CHECKED MIBBA BEFORE SLEEPING AGH. *end of fangirling*
Oh my dear lord, I don't know who I want the father to be. If it was Harry, much more drama but it would also make sense if he was because Nicole probably still loves him (maybe the point of the story) but Niall, though - it would so much easier if he was the father and he'd be such an adorable dad. Either way, the baby would have an amazing father and Irish/Curly-haired uncle.
About the Niall not visiting their flat as often anymore, how Sage is so curious about and how she always jokes about Hazz being the father...there's something I sense there, but I can't be sure if it's just me or a true feeling in this chapter...
Anyway, amazing start, flawless chapter, great, as always :)
So maybe I'm alone in thinking this, but I hope that it's Harry's baby. Don't get me wrong, I love Niall. But I feel like something happened between Sage and him, and neither of them had the decency to tell Nicole. I think the relationship with Niall is a great…distraction, from her feelings about Harry. I agree with Sage, maybe Nicole is frightened of how much she cares for Harry. Of course if the baby is Harry’s, the directioners are going to go batshit crazy. But I think the baby might actually be good for Nicole and Harry. She’d be forced to face her feelings and tell him (because I honestly think Nicole lacks the guts necessary to not keep the baby, it would absolutely destroy her.) So I feel like I’ve solidified myself on Team Harry. Onto your talent as a writer...
I LOVE your character development. The only thing I could possibly love more is the intricate layout of the plot. The reader can tell you know exactly where you’re going and exactly how you’re going to get there. It’s nice to have little sub-plots unraveling with twists and cliffhangers that don’t seem random and forced. It’s clear that you are amazingly talented and know who you are as a writer. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter. So write, you fabulous writer you, write! (:
OH SDGHKJNVSLIFDUHK I NEED TO KNOW. And Sage needs to know because Niall's totally avoiding her after she was hospitalized and it was strange for him to be the first to know so he was obviously there and you might not think we notice these things but I notice these things and they make me really happy because it means that you, unlike me, actually think out where your plot is going.