The New Alpha - Comments

This is awesome!

I intensely love this, and hope there would be sequel, even though it hasn't finished yet ;]

@ Ashlen
You're welcome!

@ iBleedSarcasm
I see what you mean, but one could argue that waking up to find no trace of Tawny would alert Zev to some kind of trouble immediately. The fact that later Nathaniel points out that Carmen's scent is also present when they are searching for Tawny would point the finger in Carmen's direction. Looking back though I probably should have made Zev's reaction slightly less dramatic. Thank you so much for the feed back, I really appreciate it. :]

Every chapter up until 13 is great. I think you're giving Zev too much knowledge in this one. When Nathaniel mentions that Carmen is missing, how would Zev come to the conclusion that Carmen betrayed them? He never spent much time with her and its not like he can read minds. I just think he should be worried until he finds out what actually happened.
Great story other than that :D

No! I don't want this to ever end XC

Amazing.

Don't be so hard on yourself that was an awesome chapter!!! awesome!!!7

Holy shit I love this! Please update soon. I can't wait to read more!

Woot! so glad you updated. Loved this chapter <3

Glad you did update though :) This was one great chapter

dude this feels like some romance novel i would buy at Barnes and Noble. Just saying. You have quite a talent here and I'm loving this story.

Wow, intense

Wow. Cannot believe Carmen would do that not only to Tawny but the whole pack as well.

I love this soo much and I dunno if I've commented before but I am now
also the last chapter you had patients instead of patience and I thought I'd tell you =]

Oh no sbe betrayed them! Smh.

i love this, so good. Tawny and Zev are good together and for each other!! SO please update again soon!

Wow I really like this, update soon.

It may be a filler chapter, but i love love loved the update! :D

Cute ^.^
Update update update !