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updateeee. please.

Mooooooaaaarrrr! I must know what happens next!!!!!

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT? NO :((((((

@ notabletoconnect
awww i wonder how you would react to the last chapter :s i dont wanna break your heart but...

you can't do that! YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO MY WEAK LITTLE HEART! YOU CAN'T JUST BREAK JALEX APART NOO WHAT ARE YOU DOING?

finally oh hell yes finally! but the chapters so sad :( I hate that Alex self harms no no no that's not supposed to happen they should be happy, gnaah :(( update soon? <3

gah so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gyfudfjruyeidfye update please D'x

@ Trenchtastic
Aww you're not gonna tell us?! I have all these worst case scenario idea guesses about who she is (Lisa, Tay, The Bride of Frankenstein, etc etc) SO MUCH SUSPENCE hahaha Even if you don't tell I still love it :3

@ hannahsings9752
Do people really want to know? I actually don't intend on reavealing it. Just to leave some imagination space for you guys. Thanks for reading btw!

@ notabletoconnect
Aha! Thanks! This really would help me when I write my next chapter or so. Although I don't think I will write in 1st POV but I will definitely write one centered around Jack. Date time!

This was a cutesy chapter. Those are nice every now and again! Good update, I'll look forward to another one, soon! (:

I'm so intrigued by this so far, i want to knowwwww who "she" is and all that jazz!! Good job making it mysterious!

aaaaaw I really like this so far and I'm pretty excited to find out what happened that night and who she is! I hope you keep being inspired for new chapters because the plot is really good. I like the way Matt and Josh are being good mates while Jack's just a complete douchebag. Maybe you could do a chapter in Jack's point of view? Something with this fake girlfriend maybe, I think that would be great! Keep updating <3

@ Trenchtastic
Haha, I'm glad I could help. Alltimefanfiction does have a beta list, so maybe you can contact someone on there. I don't reread the stuff I write either because it annoys me (and I don't think I'm good at writing, ha). So I have two people beta my work, that way they catch the errors that I know I would miss (being that I suck at grammar). But, good job on the story, really!

@ We're-Only-Dreamers
aw thanks! My first comment and it's so helpful. I will be getting someone to beta soon. I just hate re-reading my old works because I can never get through them.

Wow. Well, everyone knows that I don't read Jalex. I hate Jalex with a burning passion, but the MT and SP characters reeled me in. And I like what I read. The only thing that I want to say is maybe get someone to beta the story. You change verb tenses a few times, and have a few typos that if you have someone beta might be caught. But! What you have is good so far. Ngl, I like that Alex is the one self-harming because it's not everyday you see a fic with him self-harming! Good job, and I'll be subscribing!